Reviews For The tale of five friends.
Title: Chapter 1 Arthion's return. Reviewer: Ria Signed
That's a good start. The descriptions are well done. I really like that you describe the characters more through their interactions than their hair and eye coloring. I think you can improve it by proofreading a bit, particularly the direct speech.
Date: Jan 30 2007 12:43 am [Report This]