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Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/07 - 05:24 am Title: Campfires and Whirlpools

I really like the beginning. Your characterization of the Fellowship is clear and entertaining. I hope you put in some more paragraph breaks in the last chunk of the story, though.

Author's Response: I definitely will try to improve my formatting. I haven't gotten the hang of html yet. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Scribe Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/01/07 - 02:47 am Title: Campfires and Whirlpools

Hey, that's pretty good for your first try. Nice job. Can't wait to hear more. ^-^ Just one nitpick- try adding paragraphs in the bottom part of the story. It makes it easier to read, and it looks nicer too.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. I'm not very good with html formatting yet so I'll try to make the layout better for the next chapter.

Reviewer: elfenears Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/07 - 12:30 pm Title: Campfires and Whirlpools

love it
can't wait for balian to wake up
great idea update soon

Author's Response: Hey, I'm glad you like it. He'll wake up next chapter, which I should be putting up soon.

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