Very nice! This is a very interesting interpretation of what Tolkien said about Khamul and I like how you take his story even further. Congrats on some good work. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm actually disappointed he didn't write more about the Nine. And since many don't write about them...well, it's up to me then. ^-^
how thy heart has betrayed thee. if not for your vain outlook you would have died peacefully and never have to fight wit the dark lord sauron.
Author's Response: I assume you're talking about Khamûl, right? xD