Cute. I liked it. :) Just one thing though: perhaps it would be better if you separated the paragraphs. It might prove easier to read this way.
Author's Response: Good suggestion. This was actually copied from my account on another site, so I wouldn't have to re-type it. I'm just lazy like that. ^-^
Reviews For Look, Ada!
Title: Look, Ada! Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed
Aaawww ... that was sweet ... great job! :D
Date: Jan 22 2007 03:54 pm [Report This]
Title: Look, Ada! Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
My god. catching a fish from a fountain. *shakes head*
Date: Jan 22 2007 02:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Look, Ada! Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
*Snicker* Naughty Estel...but SO cute!
Date: Jan 22 2007 01:43 pm [Report This]