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Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/01/07 - 05:39 pm Title: Burzum and Ulkum

Lol I loved their "violence" and their "understanding" in the end. Very cute, even for a fic that features Orcs!

However, there's something I think I should point out. In some of the quotes you have there it would be better to have a comma instead of a full-stop, because you kind of answer the question what did the Orc grunt (for example). It's a thing that goes whenever you use verbs such as "said", "agreed", "noted" and such.

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/07 - 02:07 am Title: Burzum and Ulkum

Oh my god. you make them look like gentle hobbits. If youdidn't say they were orcs, i would have never known that they were not hobbits. i love these short stories you write. keep up the good work!
iggybaby

Author's Response: Ha, thank you so much! I really love writing the short stories too. (It's much easier than long ones! I'm far too lazy for that.)

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/01/07 - 08:46 pm Title: Burzum and Ulkum

The scary thing is that British behaviour IS incredibly orc like. Note: I AM British. I'm not racist, just making a point. I think the entire human race, including me is evil.

Author's Response: I have a British friend, and I couldn't agree more! xD (Joking, joking!)

Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/01/07 - 04:36 pm Title: Burzum and Ulkum

Burzum sounds like one of those British guys that are mickey take ones.
Nice!

Author's Response: That was my intention!

Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/01/07 - 02:24 am Title: Burzum and Ulkum

VF, although I doubt that orcs are this polite in reality. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you. Well, those two orcs were polite on purpose, that was the whole point. In fact, I'm thinking of writing another short story involving those two. ^-^

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