Lol I loved their "violence" and their "understanding" in the end. Very cute, even for a fic that features Orcs!
However, there's something I think I should point out. In some of the quotes you have there it would be better to have a comma instead of a full-stop, because you kind of answer the question what did the Orc grunt (for example). It's a thing that goes whenever you use verbs such as "said", "agreed", "noted" and such.
Oh my god. you make them look like gentle hobbits. If youdidn't say they were orcs, i would have never known that they were not hobbits. i love these short stories you write. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Ha, thank you so much! I really love writing the short stories too. (It's much easier than long ones! I'm far too lazy for that.)
The scary thing is that British behaviour IS incredibly orc like. Note: I AM British. I'm not racist, just making a point. I think the entire human race, including me is evil.
Author's Response: I have a British friend, and I couldn't agree more! xD (Joking, joking!)
VF, although I doubt that orcs are this polite in reality. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you. Well, those two orcs were polite on purpose, that was the whole point. In fact, I'm thinking of writing another short story involving those two. ^-^