Reviews For Falls and Pains
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Reviewer: Daewen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/10/09 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

When I first read this, I thought it was talking about me! Perfectly descriptive of a young heart.

Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/08 - 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

You are incredible!!! I wish I had your talent. Perhaps soon you will reveiw on some of my stuff (if I ever get things on-line)
Shadow Maiden

Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, it's really just emotions. I'm sure you're a great writer too! Yeah, I'll check out your stuff! Iggybaby

Reviewer: Alataril Serinde Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/04/07 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1

cool song, i sang it out loud as i know the tune to greensleeves! i love this, it's strange that i am also scared of falling...

Author's Response: i hate falling. I'm always dreaming that i'm trying to fly but I keep falling towards the ground. I'm glad you liked it! thanx for the review! iggybaby

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/07 - 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think it's really good. I've never been afraid of pain (all my fears are far less rational), but my sister is terrified of hurting herself. Up until now I've had a tendency to be impatient with her, because I've never really gotten it. Now I think I understand a bit better, and I'll be far nicer to her about it in future. So thank you. That aside, it was a fantastic poem.

Author's Response: I am glad that you understand the fear of pain a bit more. thanx for your review! iggybaby

Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/07 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter 1

This was so beautiful, and sad. Death is scary for me, too. It's something that I think we all are afraid of. Bu try not to; God IS with you. Great poem...~God bless

Author's Response: i'm not afraid of death. Well, I'm afraid of a painful death because I'm afraid of pain but i know God is with me. he will protect me. thanx for the review. iggybaby

Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/07 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like an evanscence music vid. i saw once.

Author's Response: really? i don't evanescence very well. thanks for the review. iggybaby

Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/01/07 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm afraid the only constructive criticism I have is that it was beautiful and sad (in a good way).

Author's Response: It's allright. i think the rhyming is a bit lame though. iggybaby

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