You are incredible!!! I wish I had your talent. Perhaps soon you will reveiw on some of my stuff (if I ever get things on-line)
Author's Response: Thank you! Wow, it's really just emotions. I'm sure you're a great writer too! Yeah, I'll check out your stuff! Iggybaby
cool song, i sang it out loud as i know the tune to greensleeves! i love this, it's strange that i am also scared of falling...
Author's Response: i hate falling. I'm always dreaming that i'm trying to fly but I keep falling towards the ground. I'm glad you liked it! thanx for the review! iggybaby
I think it's really good. I've never been afraid of pain (all my fears are far less rational), but my sister is terrified of hurting herself. Up until now I've had a tendency to be impatient with her, because I've never really gotten it. Now I think I understand a bit better, and I'll be far nicer to her about it in future. So thank you. That aside, it was a fantastic poem.
Author's Response: I am glad that you understand the fear of pain a bit more. thanx for your review! iggybaby
This was so beautiful, and sad. Death is scary for me, too. It's something that I think we all are afraid of. Bu try not to; God IS with you. Great poem...~God bless
Author's Response: i'm not afraid of death. Well, I'm afraid of a painful death because I'm afraid of pain but i know God is with me. he will protect me. thanx for the review. iggybaby