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Reviewer: Susan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/07 - 01:23 am Title: Chapter 1

This really moved me. Great work and thanks for posting. :)

Author's Response: Oooh! Thank you so much! ~Mel

Reviewer: Brassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/01/07 - 04:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Mel! This is a really good one! It's very dark, but in a lighter way, if that makes sense. LOL.

Author's Response: yay! And yes, it does make sense. I am a lot happier these days, so my songs are "lighter lyrically." Thanks for reviewing! ~Mel

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/07 - 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

That sounds like a cry of help! Mel,what's wrong?
your concerned friend, iggybaby

Author's Response: Ooops. Nothing's wrong Meg! I had an hour left when I finished my exam on Wed., so I decided to write a song. It is not connected to me in any way, except for the fact that I wrote it! Thanks for the concern anyways! ~Mel

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/01/07 - 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Love it, love it, love it. One of your better ones, definately. Love the 'you' bits, don't know why really. The one bit I wasn't sure about was the line, 'you are breaking your vow!' It didn't seem to flow as nicely as the rest, somehow. Aside from that, it was just beautiful.

Author's Response: Thanks! I like the 'you' also; I think it's because it kinda stops the tempo a bit. And about the 'breaking your vow' part, I couldn't think of a line that would ryhme with 'now.' Thanks for the pointers and thanks for the review! ~Mel

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