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And keep our faith and hope alive. Very beautiful and poetic. I hope I don't sound cliche here, but I really mean it.
Very beautiful. Wonderful, flowing language and descriptions. I really like it. Keep writing!
Author's Response: no critism! wow! Yeah don't worry, I'll keep writing!
iggybaby
What lovely imagery! Also, I really like that I can imagine it either in Middle Earth or in the present world. My quibble: it should be o'er (line 4) and its (12).
Author's Response: I'll go back and correct those. thanx for the review!
iggybaby
Wow...that was beautiful! Wonderful work! ~God bless
Author's Response: thank you very much. really appreciated!
iggybaby
I like that poem. Very very nice poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: wow! You must have reallyliked it to add all those exclamation marks! thanx!
iggybaby