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Date: 11/12/15 01:36 am [Report This]
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Date: 09/19/14 04:55 am [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: Freya Byron Signed
Ha ha, this is hilarious!
Score for Boromir!
*Anti-Boromir protestants wave signs saying things like, "Down with Bashers, Up with Boromir!"*
We need another chapter!
Date: 01/04/08 05:21 pm [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: Freya Byron Signed
Ha ha, this is hilarious!
Score for Boromir!
*Anti-Boromir protestants wave signs saying things like, "Down with Bashers, Up with Boromir!"*
We need another chapter!
Date: 01/04/08 05:15 pm [Report This]
Title: Oh dear, it's bad from the start... Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed
Wow, you've got to update this!! I love it and I miss Kalir!
Date: 09/17/07 06:59 am [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: Zoso22 Signed
I love this story! Those terrible horrible awful *inserts long string of adjectives* Mary Sues! *shakes fist wrathfully*

Author's Response: Heh heh.
Date: 06/30/07 07:50 am [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: Blue eyed Heretic Signed
YOU ARE A FREAKIN GENIOUS!!!!
I HATE Boromir bashing and what the hell is up with the hobbit girl?!
Btw, giving Elrond the swivel chair kept me in stitches for a few minutes... specially the end part. He he...
Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Genius, or just twisted? You decided ;)
Date: 04/23/07 09:20 pm [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Ps. I meant Male not meal. Sorry about that

Author's Response: Where?
Date: 02/20/07 05:28 pm [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Ok... Note: Kill Shadow Ranger. It IS funny. I'll give you that. BUT DON'T KILL FRODO! Kill the MS's! Kill Boromir (Oh please! Oh please!) BUT LEAVE FRODO AND LEGOLAS ALONE ¬_¬ Or otherwise everyone will know what Boromir sleeps with (Not tht sorta sleeps with you disgusting meal)

Author's Response: What the heck...
Date: 02/20/07 05:27 pm [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
*bangs head on keyboard* what horror! Stupid mary sues! kill them off i say, kill them all! muahahahaha.....
iggybaby

Author's Response: I will continue when i can
Date: 02/19/07 04:21 pm [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed
*Falls on her butt, laughing her head off* LOL sux for the fellowship...I almosty feel bad for Legolas...almost. But I have more important things to save...Like Haldirs sanity*Goops pitch in Lladri's hair* HE"S MINE!!

Author's Response: Legolas will probably be put out of his misery
Date: 02/19/07 09:38 am [Report This]
Title: The Council. (In which we meet a further TWO Mary-Sues) Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed
*doubles over with laughter* /“Otherwise two glasses of vintage wine will take over the world!” he paused dramatically, then frowned. “That didn’t sound right… pickled eggs will triumph… omelette as we know it will be destroyed./ Brilliant S.R! You give me competition in the humor business!!! Great job! Looking forward to more! :D :D :D

Author's Response: That was my favourite line
Date: 02/19/07 05:53 am [Report This]
Title: Oh dear, it's bad from the start... Reviewer: jules14 Signed
I'm sorry, I found out I can't MST this fic, with one major reason: it's actually GOOD. So besides when the characters agreed with your comments, their riffs were just plain boring.

You'll have to make this story a lot worse...add some terrible grammar and a LOT of canon-raping and sappy romance for it to be MSTed.

Author's Response: I'll do the even worse version later
Date: 02/18/07 10:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Rivendell suffers, (the sane of them anyway) Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed
NO!!!! NOT MY ELF!!! *Drags Haldir away from Sue, screaming at Lladri* DEMON SUE!!! Great chapter!

Author's Response: He might convert, not sure yet
Date: 02/12/07 05:54 pm [Report This]
Title: To Rivendell! (I feel sorry for them) Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed
Aww...*hands Kalir a chocolate chip cookie*He puts up with so much.

Author's Response: *Kalir eats cookie*
Date: 02/12/07 05:48 pm [Report This]
Title: *Whimper* It doesn't get any better... Reviewer: GreenWoodElleth Signed
*Laughs her head off* Oh man, so funny!! Poor Kalir

Author's Response: Empathy at its best
Date: 02/12/07 05:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Rivendell suffers, (the sane of them anyway) Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
where did haldir and faramir come from? i love you! oops, i mean about the jack thing. sorry if i scared you.
iggybaby

Author's Response: Exactly the point, MS stories often have random things like this that ever remain unexplained
Date: 02/10/07 07:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Rivendell suffers, (the sane of them anyway) Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed
*stabs Lladri in the gut, Lladri dies, and is brought back to life again. Process is repeated many times until BL7 hears a cough* Oh! Wonderful chappie! Grr *skewers Lladri with a kebab stick* Really great! Curse you evil Mary Sue!!! Plz update soon! :D

Author's Response: She'll get what she deserves eventually.
Date: 02/10/07 06:22 pm [Report This]
Title: To Rivendell! (I feel sorry for them) Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Speedy. Let me explain this in a wayn your small deluded mind will understand. ORCS ARE EVIL! THEY ARE NOT AFTER TEA AND BISCUITS!!

Author's Response: Prove it
Date: 02/05/07 02:54 pm [Report This]
Title: To Rivendell! (I feel sorry for them) Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
Your first paragraph was so jack sparrow style! I totally understood it! Stupid mary sue! go die in a dark hole!
iggybaby

Author's Response: I'm surprisingly good at Jack Sparrow
Date: 02/04/07 03:25 pm [Report This]
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