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Another haunting song. Good work as always. I'd like to point out just one thing: I think it's "forsaken", not "foresaken"; but I could have it wrong.
Author's Response: Oh, I'll check it. thanx for the tip!
iggybaby
Wow, beautiful. But why do you tell us not to fear it and then tell us how awful it is? It doesn't make sense to me.
Author's Response: Because i was bored! I felt like writing something and it came out pretty confusing. sorry about that! my bad.
iggybaby
I can so relate to this. Brilliantly done!
Author's Response: Really? Wow, Thanx!
iggybaby
Really good, as always. Probably not my favourite of your work, but still really good!
Author's Response: Yeah it's definitly not my best. i just posted it because i was bored and had nothing else to do.
iggybaby
Oh! I love that poem. Very nice!
Author's Response: Cool! thanx for your review.
iggybaby