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Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/07 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Two A Lorien Family

what has aniror agaisnt the men of gondor? I'm picking up some negative activity from her. i love it!
iggybaby

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment! Aniror, isn't the kindest Elf, nor is she the brightest, as you'll see. Thanks again!

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/07 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter One The Lie

mysteries... very suspencefull. i don't see anything wrong with the story so far, grammar's good and characters well described.
iggybaby

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/07 - 06:12 am Title: Chapter One The Lie

I like the way this is starting. The unanswered questions definitely pique my interest. Grammar quibble: the past tense of bid is bade.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. And thanks for pointing out the error, I'll correct it right away.

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