what has aniror agaisnt the men of gondor? I'm picking up some negative activity from her. i love it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment! Aniror, isn't the kindest Elf, nor is she the brightest, as you'll see. Thanks again!
I like the way this is starting. The unanswered questions definitely pique my interest. Grammar quibble: the past tense of bid is bade.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. And thanks for pointing out the error, I'll correct it right away.