Sheesh! That was hilarious!!! Seriously! Not funny? Yeah, right! Frankly, you need no help in this ... it's brilliant just the way it is! I'd volunteer, but I've got too much to do *sniffles* what with school, and juggling 3 stories at once ... sorry!!! However, if you need a bit of advice on humor or something like that, feel free to email me!!! 'firstname.lastname@example.org' is what you need to send it to! Looking forward to more! *adds to favorites* :D
Author's Response: That would be great, I'm lacking in the humor department. Meh, school stinks!!
I like the idea of orc hangman quite a bit. One always wonders what the orcs do when they aren't massing for some apocalyptic battle. Personally, I prefer narrative to the screenplay style of writing, but you've got funny stuff here whichever way you write it. (Can there be orc bowling?)
Author's Response: Orc bowling? sounds like an oppurtunity for more near death experiences. I'll see what I can do. Thanx for the review!! :)