I absolutely adored this one! Really beautiful, and well-written. One typo in the summary- 'loose'. It should only have one 'o'. But this was really, really good. Great job!
Author's Response: Hannad! I'm really happy you liked it! Thanks for pointing out the typo! ~Mel
is this about Cerae? Or something else? It's not me, is it?
Author's Response: No meg, it's not about Cerae. It's not you either. Don't worry about it. I based this on that friend I lost years ago. Luv ya! ~Mel
I really, really loved this poem. I know exactly what that's like...I was friends with someone for 5 years, but then she went to high school, and has never called me since, because she has made new friends...I happen to be only a year younger than her...I guess that's not good enough for her...
Sorry for jabbering. This was really a beautiful and sad poem. I'm adding this to my favorites. EXCELLENT work! ~God bless
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! And I know that "not good enough" feeling; I'm sorry you have to go through that too. Thanks for reviewing! ~Mel