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Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: LadyWarrior Signed
Oh I have to favorite this one! The evil D word.. Blah, we've all been there.
Date: 23/01/09 - 03:39 pm [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed
Ha ha! That was brilliant. I loved the ballet part and I can't wait to read more of your work!
Date: 02/09/08 - 11:35 am [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: elfenears Signed
this is very funny, now i have to get the image of gimli in a pink tutu out of my head.
Date: 01/09/08 - 01:21 am [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
I like it!
You used the word "except" when it should have been "accept."
Beside that, it was great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I will be sure to change the mistake. ~God bless
Date: 30/11/07 - 11:07 am [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: elven lily Signed
Gimli? with sweat bands and a tutu? I can see him doing pirouettes and arabesques...lol! I love it!
Date: 24/03/07 - 08:23 am [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
Ballet! i can't imagine gimli in a pink tutu. Funny!
iggybaby
Date: 13/02/07 - 08:33 pm [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Oh...Varda... Gimli...tutu... *Explodes with laughter*
Date: 12/02/07 - 01:40 pm [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
LMFAO!! Just the image of Gimli dancing ballet! It's so funny. Only one criticism, and that is the use of the word 'loose'. In the context you're using it, it should be just lose. Loose is the antonym of tight; lose is the antonym of gain. But aside from that, it was absolutely brilliant. I loved it so much. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I will be sure to fix the mistakes. Thanks so much! ~God bless
Date: 12/02/07 - 03:33 am [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: Armariel Signed
LOLOLOL...poor ole Gimli...hehehe
Date: 11/02/07 - 02:49 pm [Report This]
Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest Reviewer: Bein_Fuin Anonymous
I thought I would leave a review up to where I am. I have to go quite soon so I won't have chance to read it all today. :'( Which is a real shame because I hate leaving fantastic, humour stories written by amazing authours unread. :'(
Date: 11/02/07 - 01:13 pm [Report This]
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