I like it!
You used the word "except" when it should have been "accept."
Beside that, it was great!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I will be sure to change the mistake. ~God bless
LMFAO!! Just the image of Gimli dancing ballet! It's so funny. Only one criticism, and that is the use of the word 'loose'. In the context you're using it, it should be just lose. Loose is the antonym of tight; lose is the antonym of gain. But aside from that, it was absolutely brilliant. I loved it so much. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I will be sure to fix the mistakes. Thanks so much! ~God bless
I thought I would leave a review up to where I am. I have to go quite soon so I won't have chance to read it all today. :'( Which is a real shame because I hate leaving fantastic, humour stories written by amazing authours unread. :'(