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Reviewer: LadyWarrior Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/01/09 - 08:39 pm Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

Oh I have to favorite this one! The evil D word.. Blah, we've all been there.

Reviewer: Sil Greenleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/08 - 03:35 pm Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

Ha ha! That was brilliant. I loved the ballet part and I can't wait to read more of your work!

Reviewer: elfenears Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/09/08 - 05:21 am Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

this is very funny, now i have to get the image of gimli in a pink tutu out of my head.

Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/11/07 - 04:07 pm Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

I like it!
You used the word "except" when it should have been "accept."
Beside that, it was great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I will be sure to change the mistake. ~God bless

Reviewer: elven lily Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/03/07 - 12:23 pm Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

Gimli? with sweat bands and a tutu? I can see him doing pirouettes and arabesques...lol! I love it!

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/02/07 - 01:33 am Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

Ballet! i can't imagine gimli in a pink tutu. Funny!
iggybaby

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 - 06:40 pm Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

Oh...Varda... Gimli...tutu... *Explodes with laughter*

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/02/07 - 08:33 am Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

LMFAO!! Just the image of Gimli dancing ballet! It's so funny. Only one criticism, and that is the use of the word 'loose'. In the context you're using it, it should be just lose. Loose is the antonym of tight; lose is the antonym of gain. But aside from that, it was absolutely brilliant. I loved it so much. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I will be sure to fix the mistakes. Thanks so much! ~God bless

Reviewer: Armariel Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/07 - 07:49 pm Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

LOLOLOL...poor ole Gimli...hehehe

Reviewer: Bein_Fuin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/02/07 - 06:13 pm Title: It's A Little Tight Across the Chest

I thought I would leave a review up to where I am. I have to go quite soon so I won't have chance to read it all today. :'( Which is a real shame because I hate leaving fantastic, humour stories written by amazing authours unread. :'(

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