Now this story, is becoming ever so better as each chapter progresses! I love it and it is very realistic! Dom is one of my favourite actors so I knew I couldn't pass this up! xxx Keep up the excellent work! xxx
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're liking it so far! I'll post more soon! :)
Not bad, only one technical detail to fix.
I'm sorry if you do, but I've never heard of ringing the doorbell at one's gramma's house.
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but I'm not sure I understand what you mean with that? Do you mean that you don't say this in English, or that you never ring the doorbell at your grandmother's house? (as you may notice, English isn't my mother tongue :p I do have a beta-reader though, and she didn't say anything about that sentence...)