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Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/02/07 - 03:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Good, but for reading format, I would doublely indent every paragraph. I look forward to reading more of your's.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the review. and for the advice on the reading format. I'll work on that.

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