It's a good poem, not as good as some you hvae written, but it certainly conveys the idea to the reader clearly.I have no hope of being tiny and thin myself though, but then I don't want to be invisible!(although sometimes it would be nice to be a fly on the wall.) I can see what you are expressing though
Author's Response: Thanks! I know it isn't my best work, but I'm glad you still liked it. I don't usually feel this way any more, though sometimes I desperately wish I really could just disappear. Thank you for reviewing!