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This story is pure beauty. I just had to say that. Orlando was to die for!!!
LOL funny phone call...sweet phone call :)
Wah! I like the way you describe the characters
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A very interesting chapter
I see its been a long time since this story has been updated, which is quite a pity! I like this story a lot. The style is different and I like it. It would be great to see more of this!!
I am totally in love with this story! Please continue! Did you, by any chance, write on Elijahfan.com at one point?
nice story
r u going to continue it
Author's Response: I believe that I am going to begin the 2nd in this series where this one left off. I have been editing it over on another site and am really getting back into it.
awww so sad
u cant do this to me, i read all the 11 chapter and i canttt believe that u just put it was a dreamm i cant really plsss girl u cant do this to me that is ilegal HAha well girl i hope u write more soon cuz i really really like ur story see ya soon
wow wow that was sure a dream you are full of twists you know that when can we expect more
A dream? That's one hell of a dream! Nice twist! Can't wait for more!
damn- so close! lol can you say "sexual tension"? this is so awesome, please keep going! ~luv always* meg
Oh man. Those dreams can be killer. I can't believe Orlando wanted to get some sleep, that is what caffeine is for. Times like these. Really good, and you're a very good story teller as well. I don't usually like this format of story, but you're very good at writing it.
oh- i really like this! you've done a great job. Please keep going!
damn- what a love/hate thing here, yet it's so oddly perfect that you've been able to pull it off. please keep going!
AHHH! The suspence! I can't take the suspence! PLEASE post more VERY soon! I LOVE this!