I'm really liking this one, I like how you tell the story from their points of view, makes it more interesting. I also like how the girl CONTINUALLY gives Orlando a hard time, he needs to be kept on his toes.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're liking it so far. I like that she gives him a hard time too. Wouldn't be much of a challenge if she was a swooning fan-girl, now would it? Ali