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Reviewer: Nieriel Raina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/04/07 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is allowed and an interesting thought. I would put spaces between the paragraphs thouth, so it is easier to read. ~NiRi

Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/03/07 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. You made some excellent points. I must say that I am one of those people who didn't find anything wrong with the movie and will get very aggravated with the people who constantly complain about the changes, lol. Anyway, this was wonderfully written, and as I said; there were some excellent points made. Great job! ~God bless

Author's Response: Yes, people who constantly complain annoy me, too. If you complian once and are done with it fine, or if I'm on a messageboard where you're supposed to it's fine, otherwise I hate it. Can I ask which points you thought were excellent? Also, did you get my PM at Council of Elrond, I sent it. God Bless.

Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/03/07 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

I personally don't like the movie, and really like the points you made.
But dude, what ARE you doing in English? National essay month?

Author's Response: I'm not sure what my exact feelings on the movie are. Some days I love it and some days I hate it. At my school we have to write an essay every day. If my English teacher doesn't assign one than my history, science, health, ect. teacher will :(

Reviewer: Susan Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/03/07 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice spots.

Have you considered leaving white space between your paragraphs? I find a blank line between paragraphs greatly increases the readability of a page viewed online.

Author's Response: I'm not sure what you mean by nice spots. Sorry if it's something really obvious I've missed. I don't know how to put a blank line between the paragraphs on this website. When i turn things into my teachers they are double spaced.

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