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Very promising start. I caught a couple of mistakes, but they didn't spoil the reading for me. I hope you update this soon. :)
wow, cool chapter! anyway, i just want to know when is this story take place? well, my guess is before the battle of the one ring since i think aragorn won't be around travelling with legolas if he has a huge duty.
keep on writing please. can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, it would be before the war... meh... i forget to mention these things, forgive me. thanks for the review, and the next chappie should be up soon!
Congratulations on posting your first story here. You've chosen some great characters and a very dramatic start.
In Legolas' last line, do you mean adjoin as in "be next to"?
Author's Response: Ah heh I can see where that could cause confusion... heh... :P he meant join sides with. i'll change that... thanks. :)