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Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure begins Reviewer: Ria Signed
Congratulations on posting your first story here. It seems action-packed.




Please do two things:


*Credit any co-authors appropriately


*Please do clean up your grammar, punctuation and paragraph breaks. That will make it easier for everyone to read and get you more reviews!


Author's Response: ^^' yeah about that how bout some pointers... i kinda suck at this, i really really really need to know when to stop but i get Anxious and forget 'bout stopping... any help or pointers would be very much appretiated, and thank you for reading my post! ^^
Date: Apr 02 2007 07:20 pm [Report This]
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