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Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/07 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Adventure begins

Congratulations on posting your first story here. It seems action-packed.

Please do two things:

*Credit any co-authors appropriately

*Please do clean up your grammar, punctuation and paragraph breaks. That will make it easier for everyone to read and get you more reviews!

Author's Response: ^^' yeah about that how bout some pointers... i kinda suck at this, i really really really need to know when to stop but i get Anxious and forget 'bout stopping... any help or pointers would be very much appretiated, and thank you for reading my post! ^^

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