This is pretty good, and I'm interested. I think a bit more length might serve you well, however, and mayhaps a bit more detail. I could beta for you if you like, and that way you could have a second opinion for what you write. Great work so far, I love the plot. Keep writing and if you want a beta, just mail go to my account screen and click the 'contact' button to mail me. Nice work!
You chose a great topic: I want to see more of Aragorn and Legolas' first meeting. I think maybe an AU label may be appropriate for Legolas being a teenager. By his comment at Edoras about the leaves having fallen 500 times, he's probably at least 1,000.