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Title: Chapter 2:Aragorn Reviewer: Dragonfly Signed
This is pretty good, and I'm interested. I think a bit more length might serve you well, however, and mayhaps a bit more detail. I could beta for you if you like, and that way you could have a second opinion for what you write. Great work so far, I love the plot. Keep writing and if you want a beta, just mail go to my account screen and click the 'contact' button to mail me. Nice work!
Date: Apr 08 2007 03:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3:Spiders Reviewer: Ria Signed
You chose a great topic: I want to see more of Aragorn and Legolas' first meeting. I think maybe an AU label may be appropriate for Legolas being a teenager. By his comment at Edoras about the leaves having fallen 500 times, he's probably at least 1,000.
Date: Apr 08 2007 09:39 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: "Who is Aragorn?" Reviewer: Iwantanoceanliner Signed
Yay! I like the new chapter it's good, please update again soon, I really like your story. Alex
Date: Apr 08 2007 09:18 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2:Aragorn Reviewer: Iwantanoceanliner Signed
Very good, it's interesting, I like the way he laughs at Legolas' spider comment keep it coming!
Date: Apr 04 2007 04:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: "Who is Aragorn?" Reviewer: Iwantanoceanliner Signed
Very good intro. I'm likin' it so far. Can't wait to see what happens.
Date: Apr 03 2007 01:55 am [Report This]
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