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Reviewer: Dragonfly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/07 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 2:Aragorn

This is pretty good, and I'm interested. I think a bit more length might serve you well, however, and mayhaps a bit more detail. I could beta for you if you like, and that way you could have a second opinion for what you write. Great work so far, I love the plot. Keep writing and if you want a beta, just mail go to my account screen and click the 'contact' button to mail me. Nice work!

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/07 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 3:Spiders

You chose a great topic: I want to see more of Aragorn and Legolas' first meeting. I think maybe an AU label may be appropriate for Legolas being a teenager. By his comment at Edoras about the leaves having fallen 500 times, he's probably at least 1,000.

Reviewer: Iwantanoceanliner Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/07 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1: "Who is Aragorn?"

Yay! I like the new chapter it's good, please update again soon, I really like your story. Alex

Reviewer: Iwantanoceanliner Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/07 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 2:Aragorn

Very good, it's interesting, I like the way he laughs at Legolas' spider comment keep it coming!

Reviewer: Iwantanoceanliner Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/04/07 - 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1: "Who is Aragorn?"

Very good intro. I'm likin' it so far. Can't wait to see what happens.

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