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Reviewer: willow Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/06/09 - 05:42 am Title: Prologue--The Last Alliance

yay! evil Legolas will be fun. I can't wait, it's so funny.

Reviewer: elven lily Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 2 -- A Fond Farewell... sorta... in a way...

This is very fun to read, I hope you post more sometime in the near future!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will, as soon as I'm done editing the next chapter...

Reviewer: elven lily Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/05/07 - 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1--Flat on the Road

Oh dear...what damage could Pippin possibly do with a light saber?...I shudder to think...anyways, very funny, I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you... Pippin is a little inept, as we'll see in the next chapter!

Reviewer: elvensong Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/07 - 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 2 -- A Fond Farewell... sorta... in a way...

oh i hthink im starting to get it. its really funny hope to se the next chapt4er

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for the review, I live for them (lol)!

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/07 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2 -- A Fond Farewell... sorta... in a way...

Is chewie there? i'm really getting into this.
iggybaby

Author's Response: Yey! Chewie comes in later, though, and he has a a big part! I love Chewie!

Reviewer: Peony Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/07 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1--Flat on the Road

This is great! I love it, Pippin a jedi, Sam is Indian and i can't wait until they meet... supposedly evil... Dr. Greenleaf!!

Author's Response: You won't have to wait long! *hint hint*

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/07 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1--Flat on the Road

pippin as luke? That is so cool! If you don't mind me saying, love pip and jedi! that is such a cool match. and sam as indy. thats funny.
iggybaby

Author's Response: I was laughing as I wrote the bit about Pippin... "Nice dress."

Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/07 - 10:00 pm Title: Prologue--The Last Alliance

hah hah hah! i love the ending. "well, sort of." awesome work!
iggybaby

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Ria Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/07 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1--Flat on the Road

You deserve a review, just for the gutsiness of your concept. I love the literary genre of crossover/ mashup. (The Romans called it "contaminatio".) That said, I love the verve of your second chapter, but I don't think the prologue is doing much for it. The prologue seems to be almost verbatim from the FotR movie and doesn't match the zest of your writing voice.

Author's Response: Yeah, I kind of felt the same way... *grimace* Not my best work, but I'm a bit too lazy for work! =D Thanks for the review!

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