Oh dear...what damage could Pippin possibly do with a light saber?...I shudder to think...anyways, very funny, I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you... Pippin is a little inept, as we'll see in the next chapter!
pippin as luke? That is so cool! If you don't mind me saying, love pip and jedi! that is such a cool match. and sam as indy. thats funny.
Author's Response: I was laughing as I wrote the bit about Pippin... "Nice dress."
You deserve a review, just for the gutsiness of your concept. I love the literary genre of crossover/ mashup. (The Romans called it "contaminatio".) That said, I love the verve of your second chapter, but I don't think the prologue is doing much for it. The prologue seems to be almost verbatim from the FotR movie and doesn't match the zest of your writing voice.
Author's Response: Yeah, I kind of felt the same way... *grimace* Not my best work, but I'm a bit too lazy for work! =D Thanks for the review!