Heh, first time reading Kingdom of Heaven fan fic ever, and I have to say that it's gorgeous. Your characterization of Balian is excellent and your descriptions are top notch. Kudos. :)
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the kind review. I owe my characterization to the excellent film-making. Thanks for reading.
Nice one! I really liked this. This was a wonderful answer to Balian's crisis of faith. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm a little embarrassed to say that I thought of it during Palm Sunday mass. Shows how much attention I was paying :P