I really liked this chapter. I'm so glad Legolas listened to me and went to hug her. *wink* Great job! ~NiRi
Hi wimsey! Found you at last. *waves*
You might want to put this up at GoI, if you like :)
Author's Response: I was unsure if this would meet the guidelines there. I think I may be a little uncertain about posting it there. I would appreciate your feedback about the story. please feel free to email me at email@example.com Thanks for the review
Wonderful beginning! As you know, I'm not fond of GIMEs, but this one has me intrigued. You have begun with a believable character. Great job! ~NiRi
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouragement NiRi, coming from you that is high praise indeed.