Wow! very intriging idea, I like it. Your writing style is fun and easy to read. Please add more soon- I really want to know what happens!
Author's Response: Heh... I hope that is a good thing. I suppose it is... my teachers and friends usually say my sentences don't make sense. I write kinda weird sometimes, not like Yoda or anything but my wording is different. THanks so much for reviewing!