You know, I've never really understood that poem, why it is called a poem, or anything else about William- whats his name. Anyways, I greatly prefer yours to the original, so I guess it comes out alright in the end.
Author's Response: *laughs* You prefer mine to the original? I think that's one of the best compliments I've ever heard. Thanks, Nazgrrl, and thanks also for the lovely review.