Reviews by Adora
Summary: [Flame of Anor Winner]Thranduil asks Gandalf to help make Legolas the happy child he was before his mother's death. But fighting for life and faced with demons of his own, the king must rely on the strength of his Greenleaf to come out of this battle alive.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Elrond, Gandalf / Olorin, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51315 Read Count: 20341
Published: Oct 23 2004 Updated: Dec 18 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8: Perchance to Dream Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
One of my favorite things about this story would be the flashbacks. They really offer so much clarity and depth to the personality of your Legolas. I think you are a fantastic writer.

Author's Response: Oh really? I am happy to hear that.;) I like putting in flashbacks...;) And your compliments are making me grow a bigger head...*faints*
Date: Nov 26 2004
Title: Chapter 9: To Vanquish Demons Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Another beautiful chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! Aww!
Date: Nov 26 2004
Title: Chapter 10: The Last Stronghold Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Such powerful and vivid description! I can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: Wow, you won't believe how happy and grateful I am. I didn't think I'd receive any reviews! And here you are, reviewing chapter after chapter! How kind of you *cries*
Date: Nov 26 2004
Title: Chapter 11: Blood Upon the Sanctuary Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I love the way you've used magic in this chapter! Its truly breathtaking!

Author's Response: I am glad to hear that! I was a bit nervous about using it ;)
Date: Nov 27 2004
Title: Chapter 12: Return to the Past Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Another beautiful chapter. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see this cliffhanger resolved!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you! You make me happy!
Date: Nov 29 2004
Title: Chapter 13: Reliving Nightmares Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This was another lovely chapter. Your description is always so beautiful and I love the fact that, while I can usually predict what is going to happen next in a story, yours always keeps me guessing.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. It is surprising to me that my work tends to be unpredictable - I am honored! ;)
Date: Dec 01 2004
Title: Chapter 14: Farewell Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
You made me cry. I was hoping that you would make Legolas' return very emotional and poignant and you certainly did not disappoint me. I am going to be sad when this story has to end.

Author's Response: Wow, I am honored! Thank you so much!
Date: Dec 03 2004
Title: Chapter 15: Gathering Broken Shards Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I am a bit late with my reviewing but this was another beautiful and well-written chapter. Moving on to the next...

Author's Response: Oooh, happy to see you again! THank you!
Date: Dec 09 2004
Title: Chapter 16: I Shall Never Leave You Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Oh wow, that was lovely! I love the bonding over wine between Gandalf and the Elf-Lords and the scene with Legolas in the bedroom was so emotional! I thought that would be the end of the story, but it seems I have more to anticipate. I hope to read more soon.

Author's Response: Haha, glad to hear it! The end is coming soon!
Date: Dec 09 2004
Summary: The Ring is destroyed, the quest has been fulfilled, but only two of the Fellowship have lived to tell about it.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond
Genres: Horror, Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5424 Read Count: 9236
Published: Oct 27 2004 Updated: Oct 31 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: One Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is so sad, yet so beautiful! I love it already.

One small grammatical note- You tend to mix up "to" and "too". A good way to help with that is to ask yourself if the word means "also" or "more" (as in, "I will go too." or "Too many were lost.") Other than that, you should use "to".

Great job otherwise and I can't wait to read more!
Date: Dec 09 2004
Title: Chapter 3: Three Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is AU as all hell but I like that. Good chapter!
Date: Dec 09 2004
Title: Chapter 6: Six Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
That was so sad but very well done. Good job. :)
Date: Dec 09 2004
Summary: Grí­ma, treacherous councilor of Théoden King, flees towards Isengard, but meets someone on his way. This is the story of that meeting, and of some of the consequences.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gandalf / Olorin, Saruman, Treebeard
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25682 Read Count: 9339
Published: Oct 29 2004 Updated: Jul 15 2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is a wonderful story! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will... ^_^!
Date: Nov 21 2004
Return to Valinor by Aibrean Rated: PG-13 starstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Frodo Baggins arrives in the Undying Lands, but finds that peace and healing are not so easily won.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Bilbo, Galadriel
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60412 Read Count: 27742
Published: Oct 30 2004 Updated: Apr 04 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Your writing style is lovely! I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Adoralyna, Thank you! Sorry I couldn't respond right away. I hope you continue to enjoy reading my tale of Frodo & Cara... :-)
Date: Nov 22 2004
Fantasy by Shanastay Rated: NC-17 starstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Ever wonder what it would be like to wake up next to Legolas?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Erotica, Other
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Kink, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23840 Read Count: 25143
Published: Nov 09 2004 Updated: Nov 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Pillow Fight Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This story was beautiful the first time I read it and it is even more exquisite the second time around. You are truly a fantastic writer!

Author's Response: *blushes profusely* Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I wrote this after becoming disgusted with the quality of the NC-17 material I was finding online. I'm glad you approve of my efforts!
Date: Nov 23 2004
Summary: Tribute to Eowyn in Sindarin
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149 Read Count: 2130
Published: Nov 15 2004 Updated: Nov 15 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Ode to Eowyn Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
That was really beautiful! Might I make a suggestion though? I think "awaited" might work better than "waited". :)

Good job!
Date: Nov 15 2004
Hitchhiker by mojoryzen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A young lady picked up off the side of the road proves to be more than meets the eye...
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Erotica
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2746 Read Count: 1203
Published: Nov 16 2004 Updated: Nov 16 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Dakota Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I am sorry I haven't gotten to review this story before now, but you know how much I love your work. I hope to see a lot more of it soon.
Date: Dec 02 2004
Heart of Hearts by VSSAKJ Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Legolas reflects on how much Aragorn means to him... and it takes an awful turn on him. How is it that the subconscious can be so cruel? And yet be so right at the same time? [One-shot, complete]
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Character Death, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4197 Read Count: 1435
Published: Nov 18 2004 Updated: Nov 18 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Heart of Hearts Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
That was so tragically beautiful. You are truly a wonderful writer!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It means a lot to have someone say that...
Date: Nov 19 2004
Summary: The Truly Pervy Adventures of TELEPORNO and his trusty sidekick Elr...erm...ORGASMO! A silly fic...what happens when two elf lords are kicked out by their wives? PLS REVIEW...:D This was written for the Little Balrog Yahoo Group SEX* Challenge. *Silver-haired Elf X-tasy...because those silver Haired elves whose names start with Cel just don't get laid enough...!!!!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Elrond, Celeborn, Glorfindel, Haldir, Erestor
Genres: Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10516 Read Count: 20542
Published: Nov 18 2004 Updated: Nov 19 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Celeborn Discovers a Book Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Teleporno...No, you're not the only one. *laughs*

Author's Response: Whew...I am so glad...:D I got some weird responses the first time I mentioned it...:D There is more to come...:D Kath and I finished it awhile back...it is now jsut a matter of uploading it...:D Thanks for the reviews...:D Bird (and yes, I grin big a lot...:P)
Date: Nov 19 2004
Title: Chapter 2: Comic Book Heros Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Laughing my ass off. This is great stuff!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it...:D The rest has been posted...:D Bird
Date: Nov 19 2004
Summary: If Saruman had repented in the "Voice of Saruman" scene, what effect would that have on the rest of the story?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Saruman
Genres: Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3147 Read Count: 3637
Published: Nov 19 2004 Updated: Nov 19 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Fool's Realization Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I love this concept. I always wondered what would have happened if such a crucial moment had gone differently. Nice work!
Date: Nov 19 2004
Summary: Elladan and Elrohir have made the choice of mortality. But did they make the wrong choice?
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Elladan, Elrohir
Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Character Death, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6022 Read Count: 1673
Published: Nov 22 2004 Updated: Nov 22 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Short Story Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is a beautiful story. I love the concept and your style of writing is absolutely exquisite! Wonderful, wonderful work!
Date: Nov 22 2004
Summary: Eomer and Lothiriel's honeymoon. What do you do when plans go awry?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Lothiriel
Genres: Romance, Erotica, Humor
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6787 Read Count: 14387
Published: Nov 23 2004 Updated: Nov 28 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Not Quite Yet Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Poor Eomer! *laughs* I love this!
Date: Nov 25 2004
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - What next? We could sit and watch each other’s hair grow ;) Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is both funny and sweet at the same time. I really like it. :)
Date: Nov 25 2004
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Birds and Bees Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I came over to upload chapter 6 but it looks like you got it working! Great chapter too. :)
Date: Nov 29 2004