Reviews by Adora
Summary: [Flame of Anor Winner]Thranduil asks Gandalf to help make Legolas the happy child he was before his mother's death. But fighting for life and faced with demons of his own, the king must rely on the strength of his Greenleaf to come out of this battle alive.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Elrond, Gandalf / Olorin, Legolas, Thranduil
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51315 Read Count: 19783
Published: 23/10/04 Updated: 18/12/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8: Perchance to Dream Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
One of my favorite things about this story would be the flashbacks. They really offer so much clarity and depth to the personality of your Legolas. I think you are a fantastic writer.

Author's Response: Oh really? I am happy to hear that.;) I like putting in flashbacks...;) And your compliments are making me grow a bigger head...*faints*
Date: 26/11/04
Title: Chapter 9: To Vanquish Demons Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Another beautiful chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! Aww!
Date: 26/11/04
Title: Chapter 10: The Last Stronghold Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Such powerful and vivid description! I can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: Wow, you won't believe how happy and grateful I am. I didn't think I'd receive any reviews! And here you are, reviewing chapter after chapter! How kind of you *cries*
Date: 26/11/04
Title: Chapter 11: Blood Upon the Sanctuary Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I love the way you've used magic in this chapter! Its truly breathtaking!

Author's Response: I am glad to hear that! I was a bit nervous about using it ;)
Date: 27/11/04
Title: Chapter 12: Return to the Past Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Another beautiful chapter. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see this cliffhanger resolved!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you! You make me happy!
Date: 29/11/04
Title: Chapter 13: Reliving Nightmares Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This was another lovely chapter. Your description is always so beautiful and I love the fact that, while I can usually predict what is going to happen next in a story, yours always keeps me guessing.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. It is surprising to me that my work tends to be unpredictable - I am honored! ;)
Date: 01/12/04
Title: Chapter 14: Farewell Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
You made me cry. I was hoping that you would make Legolas' return very emotional and poignant and you certainly did not disappoint me. I am going to be sad when this story has to end.

Author's Response: Wow, I am honored! Thank you so much!
Date: 03/12/04
Title: Chapter 15: Gathering Broken Shards Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I am a bit late with my reviewing but this was another beautiful and well-written chapter. Moving on to the next...

Author's Response: Oooh, happy to see you again! THank you!
Date: 09/12/04
Title: Chapter 16: I Shall Never Leave You Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Oh wow, that was lovely! I love the bonding over wine between Gandalf and the Elf-Lords and the scene with Legolas in the bedroom was so emotional! I thought that would be the end of the story, but it seems I have more to anticipate. I hope to read more soon.

Author's Response: Haha, glad to hear it! The end is coming soon!
Date: 09/12/04
Summary: The Ring is destroyed, the quest has been fulfilled, but only two of the Fellowship have lived to tell about it.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond
Genres: Horror, Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5424 Read Count: 8798
Published: 27/10/04 Updated: 31/10/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: One Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is so sad, yet so beautiful! I love it already.

One small grammatical note- You tend to mix up "to" and "too". A good way to help with that is to ask yourself if the word means "also" or "more" (as in, "I will go too." or "Too many were lost.") Other than that, you should use "to".

Great job otherwise and I can't wait to read more!
Date: 09/12/04
Title: Chapter 3: Three Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is AU as all hell but I like that. Good chapter!
Date: 09/12/04
Title: Chapter 6: Six Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
That was so sad but very well done. Good job. :)
Date: 09/12/04
Summary: Grí­ma, treacherous councilor of Théoden King, flees towards Isengard, but meets someone on his way. This is the story of that meeting, and of some of the consequences.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Gandalf / Olorin, Saruman, Treebeard
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25682 Read Count: 8457
Published: 29/10/04 Updated: 15/07/15 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is a wonderful story! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will... ^_^!
Date: 21/11/04
Return to Valinor by Aibrean Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Frodo Baggins arrives in the Undying Lands, but finds that peace and healing are not so easily won.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Elrond, Bilbo, Galadriel
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60412 Read Count: 26700
Published: 30/10/04 Updated: 04/04/05 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Your writing style is lovely! I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Adoralyna, Thank you! Sorry I couldn't respond right away. I hope you continue to enjoy reading my tale of Frodo & Cara... :-)
Date: 22/11/04
Fantasy by Shanastay Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Ever wonder what it would be like to wake up next to Legolas?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Erotica, Other
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Kink, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23840 Read Count: 23690
Published: 09/11/04 Updated: 09/11/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Pillow Fight Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This story was beautiful the first time I read it and it is even more exquisite the second time around. You are truly a fantastic writer!

Author's Response: *blushes profusely* Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I wrote this after becoming disgusted with the quality of the NC-17 material I was finding online. I'm glad you approve of my efforts!
Date: 23/11/04
Summary: Tribute to Eowyn in Sindarin
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149 Read Count: 1984
Published: 15/11/04 Updated: 15/11/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Ode to Eowyn Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
That was really beautiful! Might I make a suggestion though? I think "awaited" might work better than "waited". :)

Good job!
Date: 15/11/04
Hitchhiker by mojoryzen Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A young lady picked up off the side of the road proves to be more than meets the eye...
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Erotica
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2746 Read Count: 1156
Published: 16/11/04 Updated: 16/11/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Dakota Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I am sorry I haven't gotten to review this story before now, but you know how much I love your work. I hope to see a lot more of it soon.
Date: 02/12/04
Heart of Hearts by VSSAKJ Rated: R [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Legolas reflects on how much Aragorn means to him... and it takes an awful turn on him. How is it that the subconscious can be so cruel? And yet be so right at the same time? [One-shot, complete]
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Character Death, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4197 Read Count: 1275
Published: 18/11/04 Updated: 18/11/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Heart of Hearts Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
That was so tragically beautiful. You are truly a wonderful writer!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It means a lot to have someone say that...
Date: 19/11/04
Summary: The Truly Pervy Adventures of TELEPORNO and his trusty sidekick Elr...erm...ORGASMO! A silly fic...what happens when two elf lords are kicked out by their wives? PLS REVIEW...:D This was written for the Little Balrog Yahoo Group SEX* Challenge. *Silver-haired Elf X-tasy...because those silver Haired elves whose names start with Cel just don't get laid enough...!!!!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Elrond, Celeborn, Glorfindel, Haldir, Erestor
Genres: Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10516 Read Count: 19754
Published: 18/11/04 Updated: 19/11/04 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Celeborn Discovers a Book Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Teleporno...No, you're not the only one. *laughs*

Author's Response: Whew...I am so glad...:D I got some weird responses the first time I mentioned it...:D There is more to come...:D Kath and I finished it awhile is now jsut a matter of uploading it...:D Thanks for the reviews...:D Bird (and yes, I grin big a lot...:P)
Date: 19/11/04
Title: Chapter 2: Comic Book Heros Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Laughing my ass off. This is great stuff!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it...:D The rest has been posted...:D Bird
Date: 19/11/04