One of my favorite things about this story would be the flashbacks. They really offer so much clarity and depth to the personality of your Legolas. I think you are a fantastic writer.
Author's Response: Oh really? I am happy to hear that.;) I like putting in flashbacks...;) And your compliments are making me grow a bigger head...*faints*
Another beautiful chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Aww!
Such powerful and vivid description! I can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: Wow, you won't believe how happy and grateful I am. I didn't think I'd receive any reviews! And here you are, reviewing chapter after chapter! How kind of you *cries*
I love the way you've used magic in this chapter! Its truly breathtaking!
Author's Response: I am glad to hear that! I was a bit nervous about using it ;)
Another beautiful chapter. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see this cliffhanger resolved!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! You make me happy!
This was another lovely chapter. Your description is always so beautiful and I love the fact that, while I can usually predict what is going to happen next in a story, yours always keeps me guessing.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. It is surprising to me that my work tends to be unpredictable - I am honored! ;)
You made me cry. I was hoping that you would make Legolas' return very emotional and poignant and you certainly did not disappoint me. I am going to be sad when this story has to end.
Author's Response: Wow, I am honored! Thank you so much!
I am a bit late with my reviewing but this was another beautiful and well-written chapter. Moving on to the next...
Author's Response: Oooh, happy to see you again! THank you!
Oh wow, that was lovely! I love the bonding over wine between Gandalf and the Elf-Lords and the scene with Legolas in the bedroom was so emotional! I thought that would be the end of the story, but it seems I have more to anticipate. I hope to read more soon.
Author's Response: Haha, glad to hear it! The end is coming soon!
This is so sad, yet so beautiful! I love it already.
One small grammatical note- You tend to mix up "to" and "too". A good way to help with that is to ask yourself if the word means "also" or "more" (as in, "I will go too." or "Too many were lost.") Other than that, you should use "to".
Great job otherwise and I can't wait to read more!
This is AU as all hell but I like that. Good chapter!
That was so sad but very well done. Good job. :)
This is a wonderful story! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will... ^_^!
Your writing style is lovely! I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Adoralyna, Thank you! Sorry I couldn't respond right away. I hope you continue to enjoy reading my tale of Frodo & Cara... :-)
This story was beautiful the first time I read it and it is even more exquisite the second time around. You are truly a fantastic writer!
Author's Response: *blushes profusely* Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I wrote this after becoming disgusted with the quality of the NC-17 material I was finding online. I'm glad you approve of my efforts!
That was really beautiful! Might I make a suggestion though? I think "awaited" might work better than "waited". :)
I am sorry I haven't gotten to review this story before now, but you know how much I love your work. I hope to see a lot more of it soon.
That was so tragically beautiful. You are truly a wonderful writer!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It means a lot to have someone say that...
Teleporno...No, you're not the only one. *laughs*
Author's Response: Whew...I am so glad...:D I got some weird responses the first time I mentioned it...:D There is more to come...:D Kath and I finished it awhile back...it is now jsut a matter of uploading it...:D Thanks for the reviews...:D Bird (and yes, I grin big a lot...:P)
Laughing my ass off. This is great stuff!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it...:D The rest has been posted...:D Bird