Reviews by Adora
Summary: If Saruman had repented in the "Voice of Saruman" scene, what effect would that have on the rest of the story?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Saruman
Genres: Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3147 Read Count: 3640
Published: Nov 19 2004 Updated: Nov 19 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Fool's Realization Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I love this concept. I always wondered what would have happened if such a crucial moment had gone differently. Nice work!
Date: Nov 19 2004
Summary: Elladan and Elrohir have made the choice of mortality. But did they make the wrong choice?
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash Characters: Elladan, Elrohir
Genres: Angst, Tragedy
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Character Death, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6022 Read Count: 1673
Published: Nov 22 2004 Updated: Nov 22 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Short Story Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is a beautiful story. I love the concept and your style of writing is absolutely exquisite! Wonderful, wonderful work!
Date: Nov 22 2004
Summary: Eomer and Lothiriel's honeymoon. What do you do when plans go awry?
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Lothiriel
Genres: Romance, Erotica, Humor
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6787 Read Count: 14399
Published: Nov 23 2004 Updated: Nov 28 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Not Quite Yet Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Poor Eomer! *laughs* I love this!
Date: Nov 25 2004
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - What next? We could sit and watch each other’s hair grow ;) Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is both funny and sweet at the same time. I really like it. :)
Date: Nov 25 2004
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Birds and Bees Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I came over to upload chapter 6 but it looks like you got it working! Great chapter too. :)
Date: Nov 29 2004
Rivendell Rednecks by elf pimp Rated: PG-13 star [Reviews - 32]
Summary: What happens when the elves are actually rednecks/elf-billies? Insanity of course!!! We would love to know what you think!! So do not hesitate to leave a comment...no flamers please...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7075 Read Count: 11533
Published: Nov 24 2004 Updated: Dec 25 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Wennie Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Ha! They talk like the slaves in Gone With the Wind!

Interesting idea, I applaud your originality. :)
Date: Nov 24 2004
Title: Chapter 2: Gornie Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
That is so wrong! *picturing it and cracking up*
Date: Nov 24 2004
Title: Chapter 3: Gladrie Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I can't get over the nicknames! Funny stuff.
Date: Nov 24 2004
Title: Chapter 4: Hal' Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I was hoping you'd make somebody gay. :)

Author's Response: It just happens naturally...;) Thanks for your reviews...:D - Bird and Kath
Date: Nov 24 2004
Would You? by resa Rated: G starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: If I asked for the world Would you give it to me?
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82 Read Count: 1965
Published: Nov 26 2004 Updated: Nov 26 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Would You? Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Short and simple but very pretty. I really like this piece.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thats really nice of you to say!
Date: Dec 02 2004
Summary: When Pippin gets inquisitive during a rest break, Legolas finds himself answering many of the questions that have long plagued his own mind. For immortality is not only a blessing, but also a curse in many ways. One-shot.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Pippin
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1238 Read Count: 4536
Published: Nov 26 2004 Updated: Nov 26 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Blessing and a Curse Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Short and simple, yet does very well at capturing the spirit of the characters. Good job!
Date: Nov 27 2004
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: Dec 31 1969 Updated: Dec 31 1969 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Interesting! Is this from a different fandom or is it a completely original piece? Either way, it's really good.

Author's Response: This is from my Eddings works -- Mostly his "Belgariad," some from "Malloreon." Read my fic "Tent Mates;" it's probably the best story I've written in this genre!
Date: Dec 02 2004
Babylon by Khylaren Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Black Hawk Down/Queer As Folk crossover. Todd Blackburn goes to Pittsburgh for vacation and decides to check out the scene at Babylon, a well-known gay dance club on Liberty Street, where he meets Justin and Brian.
Categories: Other Movies, Crossovers Characters: Todd Blackburn
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7522 Read Count: 2575
Published: Dec 01 2004 Updated: Dec 01 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Very interesting! I have never read a Black Hawk Down fic, much less a BHD/QAF crossover. I really enjoyed this story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I've never actually seen BHD, but I fell in love with Todd's character by reading Stewardess' BHD fic. It was fun writing the QaF crew as well.
Date: Dec 02 2004
Rumors by Nefertiti Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: As Gandalf and the others visit Edoras on the way back to their homes, Eomer shows his gratitude for all that the wizard has done for Rohan—and satisfies his curiosity about some rumors.
Categories: Book Verse Slash Characters: Gandalf / Olorin
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4193 Read Count: 1595
Published: Dec 16 2004 Updated: Dec 16 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Rumors Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
You know I love the Gandalf slash. :) This story is very well written and, though I have never thought about Gandalf paired with Eomer, it definitely works. Keep it up!
Date: Dec 17 2004
Summary: During a night in Ithilien, Éowyn awakes from a nightmare and remembers. With light musings on life, death, healing, memories - and love.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Faramir
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1122 Read Count: 2208
Published: Jan 18 2005 Updated: Jan 18 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Morning Dew Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
You can take a short, rather simple piece and turn it into something so powerful. I love how you paint scenes so vividly without an ounce of superfluous detail.

Wonderful work, as always!
Date: Jan 18 2005
Title: Chapter 1: Morning Dew Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Actually that last review was a total prevarication, designed for the sole purpose of catching you off guard. In truth, this is the most despicable, disgusting and downright blasphemous portrayal of Éowyn I have ever seen! How dare you pair her with Faramir?! What kind of fanfic writer doesn't know that Éowyn should only be paired with Wormtongue, Legolas or her brother? (or all three at once, if you are truly a master)

I am truly appalled. Where is the slash, the incest, the spelling errors and modern lingo? Where are the hawt elves?! And why, oh why are the characters actually in character? I must go read a Sue now to ease my troubled soul...

Author's Response: Why, you're much, much too kind. :P
Date: Jan 19 2005
Summary: Elrond lectures on why there is Nine and the real Non-Tenth Fellowship Member gets no love.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 852 Read Count: 2161
Published: Feb 23 2005 Updated: Feb 23 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: (Aka Elrond Rants About Symmetry, An OFUM Class) Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
*shoots Cam a guilty look* Beautiful work, dear!
Date: Feb 24 2005
Summary: Legolas has a rather unique encounter at the bathing pond. SpongeBob x Legolas
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Legolas
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Slash (same sex pairing)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2209 Read Count: 2592
Published: Feb 23 2005 Updated: Feb 23 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: And Now For Something Completely Different Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Well that was... *laughs hysterically* ...Very unique!

Author's Response: Thank you...

Author's Response: Thank you...
Date: Feb 24 2005
Summary: A weird one-shot on why Legolas wouldn't fall for a 'sue. Legolas/OFC.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Romance, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 195 Read Count: 1558
Published: Mar 14 2005 Updated: Mar 14 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Why Legolas would never fall for a 'Sue Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
That was short but very sweet. Nice job.
Date: Mar 14 2005
By the Sea by Kokki Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Éomer & Lothíriel — A bittersweet look at Éomer and Lothíriel's relationship and how it blossomed into the greatest love of all time. The wedding night can be extremely awkward, particularly if your marriage was arranged for a political alliance.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Lothiriel
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73101 Read Count: 29187
Published: May 21 2005 Updated: Feb 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: Broken Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is a beautiful story. I have been following it religiously ever since I discovered it and I must say, it gets better with every chapter. I hope you update soon, after leaving me with such a cliffhanger. Great work!
Date: Aug 08 2005
Learning To Fly by presnieboer Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Orlando’s cousin calls in a favor and asks Orlando to let a friend room with him for a while. Orlando agrees thinking that having a roommate might be nice now that he’s by himself and away from filming for awhile. But when Liz shows up at his door, Orlando has no clue what to do. And when she turns his world upside down challenging everything he knows- maybe for the better- he realizes that he's not dealing with any ordinary woman. When their awkward start morphs into friendship and possibly something more, is it something they can handle? Will Liz help Orlando rediscover some of the things he’d forgotten about the beauty of life?
Categories: Actor Fics Characters: Original Character, Orlando Bloom, Other
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2747 Read Count: 3106
Published: Oct 08 2005 Updated: Mar 24 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: We All Do It Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
This is a wonderful prologue and 100% truth. Excellent way to begin your story.

Author's Response: Why thank you; your opinion always means a lot to me!
Date: Mar 24 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: Calling In A Favor Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
I really don't like stories written in the first person but you've executed this well.

Just one thing- we all know he's British so try not to turn him into a cliche. The word "bloody" is already severely overused. If you want to throw in the occasional Brit slang word, that's fine. But try going with something like "bollocks" instead. A bit less obvious, that one.

Re-read your lst sentence, I think you omitted some words.

Author's Response: I\'ll take a look at that first sentence but if I remember correctly, it\'s broken up like that on purpose. Kind of done as a stream of thought more than a coherent sentence. And about the bloody thing, you\'re right, I need something less obvious. Plus it\'d be nice to have some more slang at my disposal. Do you happen to know where I could find some?
Date: Mar 24 2006
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: Dec 31 1969 Updated: Dec 31 1969 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
Hello,

I'm afraid I have to give you a negative review for your story. Quite honestly, your spelling, formatting and lack of punctuation make it almost impossible to read.

Its one thing to have a couple of errors throughout your work but virtually every line of this story is fraught with errors. Please correct this and use proper spelling, capitalization, punctuation and formatting for the sake of your readers. If you need help with this, I'd be glad to either send you links to some guides or help you find a beta reader.

~Adora

Author's Response: hey, this was my frist story and i'm only 13 but i will try harder next time. pippinrocks
Date: Nov 14 2005
Summary: Tolkien meets Austen. Marriage is in the air in Minas Tirith. Faramir contends with a gossipy aunt and a fusty servant, and finds out he is to organize the King's wedding. Pippin, Sam, Elladan, Elrohir and three Rangers tell tales over ale and meat pies--and what about that mysterious Captain from Gondor's past?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Faramir, Imrahil, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7842 Read Count: 1331
Published: Sep 08 2006 Updated: Sep 08 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed
What a fantastic story! You write with such natural talent and grace and I think the plot of this piece is unique and beautiful. I must say, I'm proud to have it on my site.

Author's Response: Why, thank you! I\"m very pleased you enjoyed it so much, and also pleased to be on the site! I hope you read the rest of my tales as I post them. G.A.
Date: Sep 11 2006