Reviews by Wyn Telemnar
Mysterious Fate by Cormak Rated: PG-13 starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 80]
Summary: Winner of the Flame of Anor Award: Best Movie Verse Story. A stranger from another realm joins the fellowship, unaware of what danger, love and heartbreak lies ahead. Legolas/OC
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Boromir, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 178591 Read Count: 103485
Published: Jul 05 2004 Updated: Feb 13 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Stranger from Another Realm Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I, too, love 10th or even 11th walker versions. It would have been funny and made it more complicated, if the woman had been hit by Legolas's arrow, minorly, of course.
Date: Dec 02 2005
Title: Chapter 6: Unjustifiable Fear Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I like that there is no love between the two at first. I wish people would be nicer to Boromir, he's rather like Gollem. Could you please add translations for those of us that are not as learned.
Date: Dec 02 2005
Title: Chapter 8: Rocks Rolling and Fading Fear Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Very nice. I'm impressed.
Date: Dec 03 2005
Title: Chapter 36: The truth be told... Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Arrrggghhhh!( faint, from lack of oxegen) It's...(sniff)...so...(sniff)...WONDERFUL! You are a Great Writer! Although you have an frustrateing style of drawing things out. I can't wait for the rest! I am not a Leggy-lover, but I love this!
Date: Dec 23 2005
Title: Chapter 16: I veleg lend ned i neled noss Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I'm not picking on you, but...Look at a map of Middle Earth, find the Falls of Rauros, find Isengard, What direction is Isengard from the Falls of Rauros? North-WEST!(I like your story, by the way)
Date: Feb 11 2006
Summary: Hoo boy. The residents of Middle-earth decide that if they want realistic fanfic written about them, they'll have to teach the authors themselves. But things do not go exactly according to plan.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Bilbo, Boromir, Celeborn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Glorfindel, Gollum, Haldir, Legolas, Merry, Pippin, Rosie, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Thranduil, Treebeard
Genres: Humor, Parody, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73189 Read Count: 149532
Published: Aug 09 2004 Updated: Aug 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 45: Much Ado About Names and Mini-Balrogs. Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Grammer Alert: Sadly, they did not know the secret mini-Balrog wing-shake and WERE discovered)
Date: Sep 28 2006
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: Dec 31 1969 Updated: Dec 31 1969 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Weird Visit Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I loved it!
Keep writing!
Date: Oct 14 2006
Summary: Gimli, Merry, and Pippin convince Legolas to try a pipe...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Merry, Pippin
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 942 Read Count: 2083
Published: Oct 08 2004 Updated: Oct 08 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Wreathed in Smoke Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Good for Aragorn! Yes, he really woundn't want to have known. I like all of your stories by the way. Keep Writing! : )

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Aragorn just needs to remember, curiosity killed the cat...especially when it involves his Fellowship!
Date: May 04 2006
Mellyn by Tathrin Rated: G starstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: We have heard tell that Legolas took Gimli Gloin's son with him because of their great friendship, greater than any that has been between Elf and Dwarf. If this is true, then it is strange indeed: that a Dwarf should be willing to leave Middle-earth for any love. And yet, where bonds this strong exist, all things are possible. Now at last, more can be said of this matter... Winner of 2005 Flame of Arnor Awards for Best Friendship!
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Eldarion, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4883 Read Count: 1873
Published: Oct 08 2004 Updated: Oct 08 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mellyn Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I'm all choked up.


Date: May 29 2006
Title: Chapter 1: Mellyn Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
YEAH! GO Gimli! I love the progression and the reality, you've kept to the canon. *claps*
Date: Dec 28 2008
Summary: What if Legolas was Female. But she didn’t tell anyone in the Fellowship. What if she was a suppressed Princess who wanted to fight to protect her country and prove that women are just as strong as men.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9998 Read Count: 7614
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 10 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
It's s-c-a-b-b-a-r-d. Think scab-bard. Somtimes I think I have a learning disability; ( i know somone w/ bipolar disorder, and she is persuring a carrer as a writer too, she's a single mom too!) my mom says the only way to get past this is to learn to type as fast as you think. It's not impossible, it just takes practice.(this comes from someone who types w/2 fingers) I think you story is great! I can't wait to read the next up-date. Keep it comeing! :)
Date: Dec 09 2005
Summary: After a young Eldarion poses a strange question, his parents and friends try to explain some of the Facts of Life to the five-year-old, and learn that sometimes you can over-think things. Rated because of discussion of sexuality, but at the level of a five-year-old, so if you pick up on anything it's your own fault for having a dirty mind! ;)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Eldarion
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2659 Read Count: 3786
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 10 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Prince's Question Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I'll just echo everybody else.
x 1000...ect
Date: Oct 12 2006
Summary: What-If?" Series. What if that troll stepped a little harder on Aragorn during the battle before the Black Gates? Would it have changed the outcome if the man couldn’t rise quickly? What if something happened to Legolas while he tried to reach the soon-to-be King, he Was rather preoccupied...
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Elrond, Elrohir, Thranduil, Elladan
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3471 Read Count: 1880
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 10 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Crushed and Slashed Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I can't wait for the rest! ; )
Date: Dec 09 2005
Summary: Haldir and his brothers find a child in the woods.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Haldir, Original Character, Orophin
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55914 Read Count: 21493
Published: Oct 13 2004 Updated: Oct 13 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17: Friends and Feasts pt 1 Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I love it! PLEASE, write the rest soon. : )
Date: Dec 09 2005
Title: Chapter 17: Friends and Feasts pt 1 Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
You havn't up-dated in months! PLEASE! -gets down on floor, pours out long speech about being a slave forever-Pretty please?-pouts-This is my favorite story!-my brother makes a mean chocolate tort! ;)
Date: Apr 14 2006
Title: Chapter 1: The Disturbance Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Pretty please?
Date: Dec 28 2008
Summary: Gimli and Legolas take a young Eldarion adventuring. Their duty: to teach the young prince about life outside Minas Tirith, and to bring him home in a condition that won't make Arwen grab for Hadhafang--which is easier said than done! Complete!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Gimli, Eldarion
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37340 Read Count: 22601
Published: Oct 17 2004 Updated: Jan 25 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 23: Friendship Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Gondor was doomed!
*laughs self blue*
Oh, that was too funny!
Date: Oct 19 2006
Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue: Aglarond Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
*weeps emionly*
*sniff* It's so..touching!
Keep writing!
Date: Oct 19 2006
Title: Chapter 1: Darkness Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Poor Legolas.
Date: Oct 19 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Light within Dark Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Do you have ckaustrophbia like Legolas?


Author's Response: Nope! Only phobia I have is arachnic (yuck!)
Date: Oct 19 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Sputtering Torches Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
How old is Eldarion?

Author's Response: Ummmm...six...ish...maybe? I, uh, I don\'t really know. I could \"picture\" the proper age and maturity and everything, but I have a hard time pinning down what year that sort of thing corresponds to. I think I figured it out, with someone\'s help, earlier...yeah...
Date: Oct 19 2006
Title: Chapter 4: Confidences Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
I wish I had a friend like Gimli, don't you ?

Author's Response: YES! *huggles Gimli, who curses and squirms away* Everyone should have a Gimli! Well okay, that\'s a lie; you have to be pretty special to deserve a Gimli. But I still want one!
Date: Oct 19 2006
Title: Chapter 5: Promises and Pretense Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Does Eldarion have any sisters yet?
Have you ever thought about putting them in something like this?

Author's Response: He does indeed, and if I can scrape out the time to finish Shadows Creeping and Ostad, the next story I\'m thinking of doing will have them in. I have a nice little timeline worked out that I\'ll probably never have time to do, but at least it\'s an attempt, right? Sigh...
Date: Oct 19 2006
White Ranger by MelanyeBaggins Rated: PG-13 starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Star Wars/LOTR crossover; Explaination inside. Rating for some violence, frightening scenes and may go up with a possible het pairing later on. Takes place after ROTK, but before Episode 1 of Star Wars.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7706 Read Count: 5067
Published: Oct 18 2004 Updated: May 22 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Awesome! This is the coolest idea! Update soon, please? *puppy face*
Date: Apr 01 2007
Summary: Faramir's Healing from his POV. Movie Canon.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Faramir
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 976 Read Count: 1778
Published: Oct 28 2004 Updated: Oct 28 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Called Home Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Repeat of the above : )
Date: Dec 09 2005