Reviews by Beregond5
She Took a Holiday by Ria Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: This is a response to GreenWoodElleth's "Bad Girls" challenge. I was terribly intrigued by the idea of a bad (not evil and plotting to rule the world, but merely wicked) female hobbit. Xenobia Took gradually goes from bad to worse in the course of her long and adventurous life.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arathorn, Gandalf / Olorin, Tom Bombadil
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6622 Read Count: 8652
Published: Jan 01 2007 Updated: Feb 27 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7: VII. The Find Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Still going strong. And the plot is becoming more and more interesting! :)

Author's Response: Thanks -- I\'ve been slow recently, but I will continue to update.
Date: Mar 11 2007
Title: Chapter 4: IV. Dark Doings Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
This chapter was great. And this is the first time we see Xenobia naughty! :D I hope she didn't hurt herself too much because of the fall - or that Bombadill caught her or something.

And now for something completely different: Aww... you're welcome! *blushes*

Author's Response: No, really -- good reading is a very valuable resource.
Date: Feb 03 2007
Title: Chapter 5: V. Hazards of the Highway Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Lol! Good explanation on how the sign of the Prancing Pony came to be, and I absolutely loved the beginning where she was dreaming of the young hobbit. :D

Author's Response: I\'m glad to hear it.
Date: Feb 08 2007
Summary: A poem written kind of as a theme for an upcoming story called 'Starlight and Ebony'.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 236 Read Count: 1256
Published: Jan 04 2007 Updated: Jan 04 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: What Makes the World Go 'Round Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Cool! So when is the story coming up?

Author's Response: eventually; that\'s all I can tell you.
Date: Jan 22 2007
Who Am I? by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A song I wrote a while back. Title expalins it all.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237 Read Count: 1275
Published: Jan 14 2007 Updated: Jan 14 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Another beautiful song. :) Btw, have you ever heard of the band Within Temptation? This song is a bit like what that band sings in general. I even closed my eyes to imagine the song performed by that band in particular. (Yeah, I'm crazy like that). Excellent work like always. :)



Author's Response: no, I haven\'t haerd of them. maybe i\'ll try and find a song of theirs and listen to it. thanks for the review! iggybaby

Author's Response: no, I haven\'t haerd of them. maybe i\'ll try and find a song of theirs and listen to it. thanks for the review! iggybaby
Date: Jan 16 2007
Icy Surrender by iggybaby Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A short song I made up when I was walking around in the snow. Very haunting.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78 Read Count: 1371
Published: Jan 15 2007 Updated: Jan 15 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
*puts to favourites* 'Nuff said. ;)

Author's Response: Yay! Two favorites! *starts jumping around the room* iggybaby
Date: Jan 16 2007
The Warlord by Scribe Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A ringwraith's history.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 708 Read Count: 1317
Published: Jan 21 2007 Updated: Jan 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Warlord Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Very nice! This is a very interesting interpretation of what Tolkien said about Khamul and I like how you take his story even further. Congrats on some good work. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I\'m actually disappointed he didn\'t write more about the Nine. And since many don\'t write about them...well, it\'s up to me then. ^-^
Date: Jan 22 2007
Secrets by Scribe Rated: G [Reviews - 14]
Summary: The Witch-King has a secret.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Witch King
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166 Read Count: 1642
Published: Jan 21 2007 Updated: Jan 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Secrets Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
"Oh, look, he made a butterfly..."

*dies laughing*

Author's Response: Ohmygoodness! Everyone is dying because of my story! I\'m a murderer...-Sob-
Date: Jan 22 2007
Summary: Theoden's thoughts as he lies dying on the battlefield.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 965 Read Count: 2119
Published: Jan 21 2007 Updated: Jan 21 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Field of Death Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Quite good. You made me want to read the book again. :)
Date: Jan 22 2007
Look, Ada! by Scribe Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Young Estel presents a gift to Elrond.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501 Read Count: 1448
Published: Jan 22 2007 Updated: Jan 22 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Look, Ada! Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Cute. I liked it. :) Just one thing though: perhaps it would be better if you separated the paragraphs. It might prove easier to read this way.

Author's Response: Good suggestion. This was actually copied from my account on another site, so I wouldn\'t have to re-type it. I\'m just lazy like that. ^-^
Date: Jan 22 2007
Summary: Two orcs search for a decent smoke within Minas Morgul.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Orcs/Uruk-Hai
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 560 Read Count: 1410
Published: Jan 23 2007 Updated: Jan 23 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Burzum and Ulkum Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Lol I loved their "violence" and their "understanding" in the end. Very cute, even for a fic that features Orcs!

However, there's something I think I should point out. In some of the quotes you have there it would be better to have a comma instead of a full-stop, because you kind of answer the question what did the Orc grunt (for example). It's a thing that goes whenever you use verbs such as "said", "agreed", "noted" and such.
Date: Jan 27 2007
Summary: A song written to the tune of Greensleeves. It explains my fears of falling and pain. Critism appreciated!
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 164 Read Count: 1887
Published: Jan 25 2007 Updated: Jan 25 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
I'm afraid the only constructive criticism I have is that it was beautiful and sad (in a good way).

Author's Response: It\'s allright. i think the rhyming is a bit lame though. iggybaby
Date: Jan 25 2007
Summary: A song I wrote about the path that most of us would feel uncomfortable with, the path of broken and discarded dreams.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83 Read Count: 1476
Published: Jan 31 2007 Updated: Jan 31 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Another haunting song. Good work as always. I'd like to point out just one thing: I think it's "forsaken", not "foresaken"; but I could have it wrong.

Author's Response: Oh, I\'ll check it. thanx for the tip! iggybaby
Date: Feb 03 2007
Summary: A poem/song iwrote about how the earth and the moon changes with each passing season. Can be set in modern-day earth or middle-earth.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109 Read Count: 2404
Published: Feb 07 2007 Updated: Feb 07 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Another great one! Thanks for sharing. :)

Author's Response: you\'re welcome. Thanx for the review! iggybaby
Date: Feb 08 2007
Reminisce by Dragonfly Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: In a time when the rule of Middle Earth is open to anyone's hands, the memories of one are could be found crucial and fatal. Whoever has that person in their power contains the key to what the future will bring: Ruin or the remainding light.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2455 Read Count: 1139
Published: Mar 28 2007 Updated: Mar 28 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Dark Elf Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Very promising start. I caught a couple of mistakes, but they didn't spoil the reading for me. I hope you update this soon. :)
Date: Apr 11 2007
Expressions by Dragonfly Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Each member of the Fellowship expresses their emotions in some sort of poetic form. Thus will I, before I explode.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1101 Read Count: 3842
Published: Mar 29 2007 Updated: Apr 04 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Glitter Gone Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
This is quite good. Thanks for sharing. :)
Date: Sep 22 2007
Summary: Balian has a dream during the Easter season. I got this idea during church service. Oneshot. As always, this is slightly AU. A 'Kingdom of Heaven' story
Categories: Other Movies Characters: Balian of Ibelin
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1031 Read Count: 2247
Published: Apr 09 2007 Updated: Apr 09 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Dream of the Passion Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Heh, first time reading Kingdom of Heaven fan fic ever, and I have to say that it's gorgeous. Your characterization of Balian is excellent and your descriptions are top notch. Kudos. :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the kind review. I owe my characterization to the excellent film-making. Thanks for reading.
Date: Jun 24 2008
The Younger Brother by Ria Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: This is a Troy/ Iliad fic. It examines the character of Teucros, who's like Faramir in some ways. When faced with temptation, the cost of yielding is high, and there's no reward for refusing.

Now complete, much to my relief.
Categories: Other Movies Characters: Paris
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: Saturday's Children
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3336 Read Count: 5512
Published: Apr 21 2007 Updated: May 03 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Uneasy in the Camp Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Not bad, not bad at all. I was a bit skeptical that you touched a topic like that, since Greek Mythology is dodgy (and I'm very picky), but I must admit that you presented the characters quite well, especially Teucros too. For some reason it seemed kind of rushed towards the end, but it could as well just be me.

Still, I wasn't disappointed. Good job. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Beregond. This was my very first original plot bunny, so I just had to write it out, but it could probably use a little more context.
Date: Jul 15 2007
Sin by Gemini_Elf Rated: PG [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Recently I've been watching an anime where the bad guys are named after the seven deadly sins. This got me thinking about sin etc. and these (Drabbles?) ended up being written early this morning. Please R&R
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celebrían, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Lindir
Genres: General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 467 Read Count: 1971
Published: Jul 08 2007 Updated: Jul 08 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Sins Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Hmm... I wonder which anime it is. ;)

With that said, I liked what you did with this, especially the way all seven drabbles connect and so make a bigger story. Good work. :)

Author's Response: :D Thanks, I never intended for them to link, it just ended up like that!
Date: Jul 09 2007
Summary: Elladan awakens from a nightmare to find himself in a nightmare... Warning: Rating is because the second chapter contains graphic violence.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celebrían, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Original Character
Genres: Angst, Fantasy, Horror
Warnings: Character Death, Torture, Violence
Series: Eternal Mellyn
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6898 Read Count: 6620
Published: Sep 27 2007 Updated: Jan 31 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Dark forces in Rivendell Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Whoa... That was pretty dark. Good job.

Author's Response: Yeah, it is very dark ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Nov 10 2007
Title: Chapter 3: Recovery? Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Okay, that sure explains what happened to them. And you'd better make sure that Elrohir pulls through!

Author's Response: lol, you\'d better start planning some Ceranos fics after you\'ve completed your trilogy then mellon nin!
Date: Jan 28 2008
Chains by Gemini_Elf, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Aragorn, Elladan and Elrohir are captured by slave traders. The ties and friendships forged between Imladris and Mirkwood are strengthened, as Libren, Rethan, Legolas, Niphredil and Glorfindel ride to the rescue
Note: Sequel of The Black Rose
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Erestor, Glorfindel, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: Eternal Mellyn
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21864 Read Count: 16907
Published: Oct 30 2007 Updated: Jul 01 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10: 10. Slave and Gloríon Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Have I ever mentioned how evil you are? *pats Elladan on the back. Realises mistake too late*

Oops...

As for Seth... I'd suggest a chainsaw, but there aren't any in Middle-earth. :p

Author's Response: lol, you may have mentioned it once or twice...And yes, Elladan will now kill you, he got whipped there!\r\nlol, chainsaws in Middle Earth, if only ^_^ Hm...*Plotting evil scheme*
Date: Mar 24 2008
Stray Child by Junodog, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 19]
Summary: While passing through the Trollshaws area, Aragorn stumbles upon a child, separated from his family and wounded by orcs. However, there is a strange secret behind this boy's existence, and there's more to him than meets the eye...
Crossover with Fullmetal Alchemist (mangaverse)
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63633 Read Count: 26364
Published: Nov 10 2007 Updated: Oct 24 2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
It's official. Now you have to work on the second chapter. ;)

Author's Response: o shi-\r\ndarn, you got me.
Date: Nov 10 2007
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Hey, I had forgotten the lullaby part! :D And it fits because I say so. :-p

Author's Response: O RLY?
Date: Dec 13 2007
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed
Sweet! Good to see it up. :D

Author's Response: you lie. hissssss.\r\nI mean... :D
Date: Nov 12 2007