I love this story! It's beautifully written, and I really don't have any constructive critcism. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am sorry I didn\'t respond sooner - I just saw this! (pesky email!).
Oooh, this is really, really good. I can't wait to read the rest! Just one little, itty-bitty thing. In one of my stories I was trying to type Eowyn and Eomer with an accent and it came out looking like this ...owyn. It seems to be doing the same thing in your story.
This is such a cute one-shot! And I don't say cute as in primitive - you've done a really good job, it's written very well.
Author's Response: *grins* Thanks, it was really, ahem, \"fun\" to write this story! (You should\'ve seen me. I went out for a boat ride, and then got soaking wet... You can guess how. That partly fueled my inspiration.)
Le hannon! --Alatariel Narmolanya
This seems really good so far. Keep up the good work, and know you have a faithful reader keeping up to date with it! :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I\'ll try to update a chapter as soon as I can!
...Wow. I've tried to write poetry, and it usually comes out sounding like a bad Madonna song. This is really, really good work.
Just one question, though. Whose horse is it?
Author's Response: No named character\'s. Just one of the many Rohirim warriors at Pelanor Fields. Should I name the horse, and/or rider?
I had always wondered how he'd never heard of her before. I think this is a very good explanation.
Author's Response: Thanks LadyofLight and everyone for your much appreciated reviews!
Ooo, this is a very interesting theory. Never thought that the veil might lead to Middle-Earth. Can't wait to read more!
I really like this story. Please continue!
This is such a cute story! I love stories with the hobbits when they were younger.
Author's Response: Oh I do too! They must have been so cute when they were little. ^_^
This seems very interesting so far. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! The idea just came to me while I was waiting for a recital. (Ehhh... Not so a good time to be capturing plot bunnies.) :D Thanks! By the way, if you have any guesses of the boy\'s identity, feel free to guess. :)
Wow this is a really good story. I always love it when authors explore into - to my knoweledge - uncharted territory. It's really fun for a reader to read. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks, LadyofLight! :D I love to explore into uncharted territory as well, with slight backup from the Professor himself!
Oh yay! I've been waiting for someone to reply. You've got a great start so far, I can't wait to see what you come up with.
Author's Response: thanksies. I working on some of my others but i\'m dead right about now. so i think i\'m goin to turn to this little start.
I enjoy the really, reallys, as you can tell. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: thanx i really like review, really, i do. *wink*
Oh, this looks very interesting. Very well-written first chapter, I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Oh that is such a touching piece! I love how you don't go into great detail or anything - the simplicity of it is just perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!