You have caught my interest! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks, thats what I like to hear! The reason why I havn\'t written too much is because I\'ve been on training weekends for the TA, so i\'m abit busy. I will do some more soon though, especially now people want me to. :)
I am looking forward to seeing how your characters develop in this story. I like how you are taking the time to set things up before racing relationships forward. I can hardly wait to read what happens after the rude awakening incident!
Author's Response: I\'ve added some more to chapter 6 by the way, the what happens next bit :)
I think you are doing a good job at making this story very realistic. Do not feel obligated to make it into a romance unless you feel that is the direction it should take. Otherwise you almost have to "force it" when you're writing, if you know what I mean.
In regards to the romance department though, I can see where an elf would be attracted to someone who fell into middle earth, even thought human, simply because of the fact elves live so long and it is probably very rare that they would come across anyone different, if you know what I mean. It would be a shocker to discover they haven't seen it all. Other races don't live as long and therefore probably don't have that been there, done that attitude the elves radiate. Who knows if curiousity would generate lovey dovey feelings, but hey, you never know. As far as not many people writing stories where the girl falls for a random Gondorian soldier, or one of the hobbits, I think many a teenage girl is living out her own fantasy through the story, and let's face it, Legolas has quite the fan club out there.
You've done a very good job at setting the stage for this story. It's different from other stories I've read. I'm looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Soon to be updated.
I like this story so far. It will be interesting to see how things progress...
I like this story a lot. Once again there are a lot more questions than answers in my mind regarding Legolas and Eleina's relationship, which is good since it keeps the reader interested. Hope you can find the time to update soon.