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An Attempt At Realism by Aralia Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Young woman finds herself in Middle Earth, unfortuately it's nothing like the films, the little book knowledge she has is hardly any help either.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Denethor, Diamond Took, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gollum, Ioreth, Ioreth, Legolas, Merry, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Sauron, Treebeard, Witch King
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15421 Read Count: 22223
[Report This] Published: 06/04/06 Updated: 29/05/06
Reviewer: Shaylee7 Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-The Male

You have caught my interest! I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks, thats what I like to hear! The reason why I havn\'t written too much is because I\'ve been on training weekends for the TA, so i\'m abit busy. I will do some more soon though, especially now people want me to. :)

Reviewer: Shaylee7 Signed
Date: 14/04/06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Night time troubles

I am looking forward to seeing how your characters develop in this story. I like how you are taking the time to set things up before racing relationships forward. I can hardly wait to read what happens after the rude awakening incident!

Author's Response: I\'ve added some more to chapter 6 by the way, the what happens next bit :)

Reviewer: Shaylee7 Signed
Date: 29/05/06 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-Why's and How's

I think you are doing a good job at making this story very realistic. Do not feel obligated to make it into a romance unless you feel that is the direction it should take. Otherwise you almost have to "force it" when you're writing, if you know what I mean.
In regards to the romance department though, I can see where an elf would be attracted to someone who fell into middle earth, even thought human, simply because of the fact elves live so long and it is probably very rare that they would come across anyone different, if you know what I mean. It would be a shocker to discover they haven't seen it all. Other races don't live as long and therefore probably don't have that been there, done that attitude the elves radiate. Who knows if curiousity would generate lovey dovey feelings, but hey, you never know. As far as not many people writing stories where the girl falls for a random Gondorian soldier, or one of the hobbits, I think many a teenage girl is living out her own fantasy through the story, and let's face it, Legolas has quite the fan club out there.

Summary: She has to do it. It is her honor. She could, would, and should take revenge of the son of the one who has destroyed her family and her lands. But even the strongest wills can be bended, and the coldest of hearts can be melted. What begins as a quest for a simple murder dances itself into a struggle of wills, nature, and hearts. But the past, the present, and the future hunt all of them...

The bowstring will be loosened, the arrow will fly, and the hunter must become the hunted.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12036 Read Count: 6972
[Report This] Published: 10/04/06 Updated: 16/05/06
Reviewer: Shaylee7 Signed
Date: 11/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One - Last Flame

You've done a very good job at setting the stage for this story. It's different from other stories I've read. I'm looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Soon to be updated.

What It Means To Be by Shiloh Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Once upon a time, Legolas and Eleina were "Legolas and Eleina." Things changed, time passed, a war happened, and now two strangers are trapped in an inescapable marriage that wasn't even their idea. The new Fourth Age means a fresh start for all of Middle Earth, but does everyone really want a fresh start? When is it time to stop kicking a dead horse?
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Gimli, Legolas
Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14952 Read Count: 6443
[Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 12/12/10
Reviewer: Shaylee7 Signed
Date: 07/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this story so far. It will be interesting to see how things progress...

Reviewer: Shaylee7 Signed
Date: 27/06/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like this story a lot. Once again there are a lot more questions than answers in my mind regarding Legolas and Eleina's relationship, which is good since it keeps the reader interested. Hope you can find the time to update soon.