This is shaping up to be a wonderful work of modern literature! I hope that my expectations are dashed with even better work than thus far I have seen!
Awww, I feel so much sympathy for Ariel, that I am about to burst! Thank you for writing this, and keep up the woderful writing.
I love this story!
This mustve been a bit awkward for poor Orlando!
haha...poor Dom and Elijah!
haa...again, I am compelled to feel pity for the hobbits...
poor poor poor poor poor POOR Dom and Elijah!
that is sad
well, if Orlando makes a fool of himself, then Dom will be the one to beat the living shit out of him!
awww...this story has broken my cute-ometer
ahh! i bought another cute-ometer, but you broke it again! haha this story is soo lovely and amusing and simply interesting, something that I admire in a fanfiction.
this is really utterly sweet, in its purest form. I love it when the guy in the relationship tells his male friend about his feelings for the woman.
this was an amusing chapter. I wonder what will happen next?
Dom playing matchmaker...something interesting is bound to happen...
Aww, the wretched cute-ometer broke again! This is the sweetest, most genuine story that I have been privy to sinces Nadia's "Wynter." I hope it gets even better!
This is sad. I felt much the same when I attended my late grams' recent funeral.
Awww, Orlando is so cute in this. I hope the feelings between him and Ari never die.
Aww...this story gets better with each chpter that I read, truly.
Aww...and I thought that it was real! What a fool have I been...
Aww...you make Orlando out to be a good friend.