I did review every single on of your stories but sadly they were lost. I just wanted you to know i admire your writings and i aspire to be like you.I can't really sum up what i write for all those reviews, but i wanted you to know i enjoyed submitting every word in each review
Author's Response: I remember your reviews, and even though they were swept away in the site crash, I still appreciate them. I am always thrilled and humbled when anyone says they want to write like I do. Thanks you so much. I hope you will enjoy what you read from me in the future. :o)
Mmm...this seems way too casual and colloquial for a Tolkien story sorry. You seem to have rather large gaps in your story and if you can't spell, learn to!
Learn some elvish, sindarin mostly if you're going to write fanfiction.
Have traditional or made up names, I hardly think Rebeka is an elvish name.
Do no use colloquial language, such as: "Don't" or "Ass" it ruins the flow of the story completely.
I know this is your first but please let someone else read over before you post it...
WOW very complex writing style,reminds me of Le Carre and thats a compliment btw.But its good.
Please pretty please gwenneth update for heavens sake! lol i mean it!
Hey gwenneth you are alive! Praise the lord! lol sorry if my previous review was a bit rude but when i dont have a finished story i get desperate you are one of my fave authors.BTW its SO YUN not YO SUN
Author's Response: ACK...my bad! *smacks head* Sorry! Sheesh, can you tell I\'m dsylexic! I was almost right! I\'ll remember next time it\'s So Yun! Thanks for reading and I\'m glad you enjoyed. I didn\'t think the review was rude! And I will TRY to update WaSF too.
Ah gwenneth i loved it a job well done now *rounds down on gwenneth* you had better update the other one, OR ELSE lol
Wow tathrin that was an awsome chapter cant wait for your next update...
Your loyal reader
Author's Response: Sorry it\'s taking so abysmally long! So glad you\'re enjoying, though, snail\'s pace though the chapters do appear.
Very good! You have a great writing style i like it. I hope to read more of your works.
PLease please review i love the storyline, very good.Continue on i shall b waiting mwaHA! lol don't mind me just u[date soon!
Author's Response: So Yun, I am not posting on here at the moment, I just don' thave time. But this story is posted on Fanfiction.net. So if you want to read most of it, mind you it isn't done and I can't update for a while, you can do it there...Thanks for reading!
UPDATE SOON PLEASE! lol
Nice do u feel like updating?
GrrR Sivan yet another not updated lol oh please update!
Sivan short and sweet but i reckon legolas should have died lol
Sivan i am trying not to kill you at this moment. I HATE CLIFFIES! LOL
Author's Response: Do you? LOL! Thank you for your review, it\'s make me feel good when you are not try to kill me... lol! Sivan Shemesh
Sivan you did it again! LOL that chapter was so heart breaking but update soon i think you have too many stories to handle lol. Mite be nice if you replied to ur loyal reviewers too? :)
Author's Response: What? What did i do? LOL! I will do so, though forgive me about that. Thank you for your sweet review, i\'m glad to know that you love it. Sivan Shemesh
Oh valar my arse sivan lol that was good, but hello? As i say again why dont u reply to us reviewers?
Author's Response: Forgive me about that. I\'m glad to know that you love it, and i\'m thank you for your review. Sivan Shemesh
Ooh goody i think i like this one alot
btw my mission is to review all of your stories lol
Lol i would love to see legolas being choked. Btw i tried to join ur yahoo group stupid thing would let me but it looks good.
I have lost count of how many reviews i have posted but seriously you too for your age you are incredible i am only 13 and my writing is well crappy lol.
Celebalda? lol nice name no offence meant