Great story so far. I decided to review here rather than via e-mail. Looks like a 'must read'!
Author's Response: Oooh a must read! haha thanks for the compliment!
I really enjoy your story thus far and hope you update soon. I've been checking for the past few weeks for an update and so far, I'm still waiting but don't worry; I know how hard it is to find the time to write).
No offense, but what does this have to do with Lord of the Rings?
Author's Response: Nothing really. I just post songs I write because I thought others might like them. ~Mel
Author's Response: No offense taken. ;-)
Excellent beginning. I do so love this type of story. Not sure how I missed it before.
How come you don't have more reviews? Great story, Have you posted this elsewhere? The torture seems 'about right' if you can say such a thing. But uh huh, they'd better get to him quick!
Author's Response: No I haven\'t posted it elsewhere, though I have considered it. I\'m glad you like it!
Hope this makes you feel better. I really enjoy this story, and of course, it's no fun writing if no one reviews. I just came across this this afternoon and am steadily reading through. Your torture scenes and the results seem pretty realistic (I think I said that before). But it's true. Too often, a character is tortured in one scene and fully recovered the next. Very good story. Keep your chin up and keep writing!
P.S. Siblings are hardly ever like Elladan and Elrohir!
Author's Response: Aw thanks, it\'s true, it isnt much fun writing if no one reviews, and thanks to those who do. Im glad you find the torture realistic. :) I do my best. Thanks for reading!!
This is just a hurried up review; I'll save the other one for you know where. But honestly, I am SO enjoying this story. Your writing is a breath of fresh air. More later when I really have some time to comment. For now, I just wanted to give you another review. You richly deserve them. Aragorn is far too trusting but that's not a fault or at least it shouldn't be.
Author's Response: Hey, estelstheone, fancy seeing you here! :) I look forward to your comments later.