i thought it was ok, but i do suggest u not write in present tense again. just some friendly advice
Author's Response: thank you;)
this story sux! wut's wrong w/ u, anyway?! u MUST be gay if u think that's funny.
Author's Response: *laughs uncontrollably* Oh god, what a hilarious review. But seriously, if you\'re gonna tell me my story sucks, at least do it without insulting homosexuals, who really don\'t deserve it. Oh, and use proper spelling. Smell ya later!