Reviews by Nieriel
Summary: Wracked with guilt over Jean's death, Rogue lives in misery, blaming herself for it all. The voices in her head scream at her, never giving her a moments peace. One morning she awakens in forest somewhere.....a place where there are Elves, Dwarves, Hobbits.....and a place where mutants are treating like everyone else.....Now, Rogue embarks on a journey with two men, a dwarf, a wizard, four hobbits, and incredibly handesome elf....who ends up showing her that just because you're different doesn't mean that you can't have what everyone else does....love and a chance at a new life in "A Whole New World."
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Boromir, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14949 Read Count: 9437
Published: Jul 09 2004 Updated: Jul 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
There were typos and stuff, but overall I enjoyed.
Date: Jul 27 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter two Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Interesting, and I liked it, but one note: you absolutely cannot go from third person Point of View and randomly inject yourself into the story by saying stuff like "Now, I'm not talking one of those..." etc. It's extremely distracting, and doesn't make sense either. Why would the author be saying this anyway? You could just as easily say: "It wasn't just one of those..." etc.
Date: Jul 27 2006
Vampiric Dawn by Seribaba Rated: R starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Part 1 of Arwen Trilogy. As a young child, Arwen comes face to face with a legendary creature destined to change her life forever.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Legolas, Elrond, Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21983 Read Count: 11192
Published: Aug 09 2004 Updated: Nov 04 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Beast in the Roses Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
ooo intriguing...
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Unfamiliar Ground Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
wowza. I like. *continues on*
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Who Is That Child? Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
This is really v. good...
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 4: Who is That Lady? Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
whee, I like the alternating POV.
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 6: Debating Faye's Fate Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
ahh! must...keep...reading...
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 7: Garunthor Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
haha, Garunthor is nice.
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 11: The Miracle Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
I really really liked this story! goood job.
Date: Apr 24 2006
Summary: Thranduil laments the dangerous future his youngest son, Legolas, is likely to face.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Thranduil, Original Character
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2324 Read Count: 4253
Published: Aug 21 2004 Updated: Aug 21 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chpater One Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Very good! I like your Thranduil, hehe. I especially like your writing style; it is very fluid and smooth and engaging. Keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: I love Thranduil, so I try hard to make him appear to others the way I see him. I\'m happy you think my writing is easy to read. I try hard at that, too. I will keep going as long as I\'m able to. Thank you very much.
Date: Jun 24 2006
Summary: Two immortals think on their friends' inevitable death, and try to find some comfort...Filled with the bittersweet sadness of the Elves, it's a short vignette that touches briefly--very briefly--on how difficult it is for an immortal to understand death, and an attempt to cope with their different choices regarding those deaths. Might end up having a longer story built around it later, but for now it’s just a short addition to the LoTR universe.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Legolas, Arwen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 534 Read Count: 1671
Published: Oct 09 2004 Updated: Oct 09 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gurthu a Kuil: Death and Life Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Soo...goood...you really are quite talented.

Author's Response: Why, thank you! Very much so!
Date: May 06 2006
Summary: After a young Eldarion poses a strange question, his parents and friends try to explain some of the Facts of Life to the five-year-old, and learn that sometimes you can over-think things. Rated because of discussion of sexuality, but at the level of a five-year-old, so if you pick up on anything it's your own fault for having a dirty mind! ;)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Eldarion
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2659 Read Count: 3713
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 10 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Prince's Question Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
HA this was definitely the most amusing almost slash thing I have ever read. Whooo. :D

Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you enjoyed! :D
Date: May 02 2006
Trust To Hope by Novedhelion Rated: PG-13 starhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Éomer and Lothíriel, my spin. Mostly book canon...a bent toward the movie when it suited me...and some creative license. Hence the reason it is called fanFICTION, emphasis on the FICTION. Enjoy! FIRST PLACE WINNER/BEST HET STORY MY PRECIOUS AWARDS 2004
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Lothiriel
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 212099 Read Count: 30159
Published: Nov 08 2004 Updated: Mar 08 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
woo good so far *reads on*
Date: Apr 25 2006
Summary: (Part of the "Lay of Mary's End" challenge from Noldo) With a flash of light, a girl appears in Fangorn Forest just in time to meet up with our heroes. However, things don't go quite as she planned...For all those who have read one too many bad 'Sue fics. ;)
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Gandalf / Olorin, Original Character
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1215 Read Count: 1528
Published: Nov 20 2004 Updated: Nov 20 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mary-Sue in Fangorn Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
woo ya. It's kind of funny how they thought that she was some magical thing, hehehe. all mary sues should be shot.

Author's Response: Can you imagine Saruman sending out hordes of MS\'s to make the Fellowship\'s lives miserable? That would be evil, even for him! ;) Totally agree about the shooting. More than once, even!
Date: May 06 2006
Summary: Semi-canonical, set in the early Fourth Age, exploring the possibility that Arwen, as queen of Gondor, might not have had the time or the energy to care for her daughters. Warning: Some may consider to be anti-Arwen.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Faramir, Original Character, Other, Elboron
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3003 Read Count: 1886
Published: May 05 2005 Updated: May 05 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mother and Daughter Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
I really liked this a lot, it was very compelling. The emotions were real, Ireth was real. Although Arwen seems to have forgotten that she is the daughter of a great lord, too, and she didn't listen to him when he didn't want her to marry Aragorn! Yet she expects Ireth to do so with a Haradren prince. -_-

Great job though :D
Date: Jul 01 2006
By the Sea by Kokki Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Éomer & Lothíriel — A bittersweet look at Éomer and Lothíriel's relationship and how it blossomed into the greatest love of all time. The wedding night can be extremely awkward, particularly if your marriage was arranged for a political alliance.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Lothiriel
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73101 Read Count: 28747
Published: May 21 2005 Updated: Feb 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Night Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
V. nice!
Date: Apr 20 2006
Title: Chapter 2: The Morning After Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Eek, Eomer is so odd, lol. One minute he's sensitive, the next he's oblivious. Sort of how guys are though, haha.
Date: May 07 2006
Summary: Life through Eowyn's eyes, and how she deals with rejection from Aragorn. Will soon get more juicy.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Faramir, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama, Angst
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 677 Read Count: 1706
Published: Dec 17 2005 Updated: Dec 17 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Introduction Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
it was good, your choice of first person was good. However, when Eowyn was "thinking" to herself, obviously, you switched back and forth from present and past tense alot, which can get confusing.
Date: Apr 12 2006
Summary: Gimli goes to Aman with Legolas. The Elves, naturally, do not approve of this state of affairs.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Other
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618 Read Count: 1714
Published: Dec 21 2005 Updated: Dec 21 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gimli Goes To Aman Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
HA, "I demand a recount" hilarious. Okay, I think possibly you should change the "we have decided that you are a dwarf." it's more taking Treebeard's line than originality. Also, Galadriel is a very influential Noldo, but I doubt that they would let a dwarf into Aman just because she wanted them to. lol. I liked reading it though, it was quite amusing. teehee ^_^

Author's Response: Who says I\'m original? I\'m a thief! Perhaps Galadriel\'s not that<\\i> influential, but oh well, she had to be for the sake of the story. Thanks for reviewing! Faramiriel
Date: Apr 18 2006
Blood Thorns by angelsfyre1 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 27]
Summary: A possible spy is captured by the sons of Elrond just after the departure of the Fellowship. Is she truly a threat? That is what Glorfindel and the twins wish to discover. GlorfindelOC ,OC,M/F
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Elrond, Elrohir, Elladan, Glorfindel, Original Character, Erestor
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26675 Read Count: 17349
Published: Jan 21 2006 Updated: Nov 01 2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Arrival of Chaos Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
This is certainly a good story idea, but it would be a much more pleasant experience if it was formatted better (more paragraphs instead of blocks). Also, I could beta read for punctuation for you if you'd like :) I always like to help.

Basically, though, it was a good start. :D
Date: Jul 26 2006
Summary: The little emo hobbit saves the day.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 326 Read Count: 1444
Published: Jan 27 2006 Updated: Jan 27 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
I am not emo and certainly not a fan of emos, but if you are going to write a story about them you might try to be a bit more mature about it. As in, at least have good punctuation, and refrain from saying the same thing over and over. Unless this isn't a story, and just a rant.
Date: Apr 18 2006
Summary: King Aragorn is going on with his usual business when a man appears in front of him. This turns out to be Sirius Black. They later meet Captain Jack Sparrow as well. Together, the three characters from different worlds go on an adventure in Middle Earth, becoming close friends.....Aragorn, Sirius, AND Jack-three hotties all in one........can you say HELL YES!?
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Bilbo, Boromir, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other, Pippin, Rosie, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Treebeard, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1764 Read Count: 6149
Published: Feb 03 2006 Updated: Feb 19 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Legolas or Will? Legolas or Will? Legolas or Will? Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
just had to point out that you would say "Tengo un gato grande en mi pantalones" :P

Author's Response: gracias...

Author's Response: ...but what did you think of the story...?
Date: May 29 2006
Destiny's Arrow by DiableRouge Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Minas Tirith. Three days before the wedding of Arwen and Aragorn. Jealousy rears it's ugly head.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57708 Read Count: 26576
Published: Feb 06 2006 Updated: Apr 18 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: At the Gates Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
yup, I read all the way to chapter 18, because I'm naughty and didn't review along the way. I started reading this because I was bored and it sounded good, but then I was like, "hmm, I don't like Legolas/Arwen" but I kept reading because you have a wowza writin' style. :P

but anyways, at first I was like, "legolas is sentimental and pissed. legolas is obsessed with arwen. lawd, this is going to be one heck of an odd fic." but I kept reading because like I said, you write well.

But then when you jumped to the flashbacks, it made it so much more convincing. The legolas/arwen relationship thing. I don't think I would have believed it if you hadn't done that little "insight into the past". That and that alone was the one convincing factor that made the story all the more heartrending for their separation. if you had not done that, I would have been like wth? and stopped reading. but you made a great choice, so, yay! :D

The emotions were soo good, Eowyn so conniving, and a really original twist on the Aragorn/Arwen relationship. Parts with Arwen being all depressed and sad about her fate yet trying to be glad SO good (probably because of the flashbacks, lol) but also because you are a good writer. Loofed!

:) can't wait til the end.

Author's Response: First, thanks so much for your review. Second, let me just say that when the idea first occured to me, I thought it was a little odd too. But once I got to thinking about it, it really bothered me that Arwen was just a pretty little carrot that motivates Aragorn to do his thing and then shows up again at the end to be his brood mare. I kept thinking about how she\'s already hundreds, even thousands of years old when Aragorn is born and how if we\'re just going on the bare outline of a relationship that Tolkien wrote for them, they don\'t even know each other all that well at the time of their marriage. So I hooked her up with Legolas and voila! Personally, I can\'t wait until the end either! IM me sometime (if you ever see me on :)).
Date: Jun 20 2006
Summary: This story will take place after Legolas returns home from Gondor. This is my first fan fic so if you read it and don't like it please tell me
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 603 Read Count: 5458
Published: Feb 24 2006 Updated: Apr 14 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Friends of old Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
this chapter seems a bit over the top in terms of realism. first off, there is basically no introduction at all. He is talking about always loving Cathrina, yet when he sees her, he doesn't know who she is? I realize it's been a few years, but still. The characters are not developed, something that could be achieved in a longer composition. You may also want to stay grounded in one point of view per scene. You switch from Legolas to Cathrina midway through.
Date: Jun 08 2006
Title: Chapter 2: A New Feeling Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
I'm sorry, but you really need to lengthen these chapters. Tell us what happened in the year. Create sympathy for the characters by showing us events that occurred. I don't think Legolas would be that ambiguous...and please...get a grammar checker. Not to trying to flame you here, trying to help.
Date: Jun 08 2006