Penname: Nieriel [Contact] Real name: Amanda
Member Since: 19/03/06
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Summary: Wracked with guilt over Jean's death, Rogue lives in misery, blaming herself for it all. The voices in her head scream at her, never giving her a moments peace. One morning she awakens in forest somewhere.....a place where there are Elves, Dwarves, Hobbits.....and a place where mutants are treating like everyone else.....Now, Rogue embarks on a journey with two men, a dwarf, a wizard, four hobbits, and incredibly handesome elf....who ends up showing her that just because you're different doesn't mean that you can't have what everyone else does....love and a chance at a new life in "A Whole New World."
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Boromir, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14949 Read Count: 8389
[Report This] Published: 10/07/04 Updated: 10/07/04
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 27/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

There were typos and stuff, but overall I enjoyed.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 27/07/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter two

Interesting, and I liked it, but one note: you absolutely cannot go from third person Point of View and randomly inject yourself into the story by saying stuff like "Now, I'm not talking one of those..." etc. It's extremely distracting, and doesn't make sense either. Why would the author be saying this anyway? You could just as easily say: "It wasn't just one of those..." etc.

Vampiric Dawn by Seribaba Rated: R [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Part 1 of Arwen Trilogy. As a young child, Arwen comes face to face with a legendary creature destined to change her life forever.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Arwen, Legolas, Elrond, Original Character
Genres: Drama
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21983 Read Count: 9859
[Report This] Published: 10/08/04 Updated: 04/11/04
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Beast in the Roses

ooo intriguing...

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Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: Unfamiliar Ground

wowza. I like. *continues on*

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Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: Who Is That Child?

This is really v. good...

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Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 4: Who is That Lady?

whee, I like the alternating POV.

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Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 6: Debating Faye's Fate

ahh! must...keep...reading...

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Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 7: Garunthor

haha, Garunthor is nice.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 24/04/06 Title: Chapter 11: The Miracle

I really really liked this story! goood job.

Summary: Thranduil laments the dangerous future his youngest son, Legolas, is likely to face.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas, Thranduil, Original Character
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2324 Read Count: 3717
[Report This] Published: 21/08/04 Updated: 21/08/04
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 24/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chpater One

Very good! I like your Thranduil, hehe. I especially like your writing style; it is very fluid and smooth and engaging. Keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: I love Thranduil, so I try hard to make him appear to others the way I see him. I\'m happy you think my writing is easy to read. I try hard at that, too. I will keep going as long as I\'m able to. Thank you very much.

Summary: Two immortals think on their friends' inevitable death, and try to find some comfort...Filled with the bittersweet sadness of the Elves, it's a short vignette that touches briefly--very briefly--on how difficult it is for an immortal to understand death, and an attempt to cope with their different choices regarding those deaths. Might end up having a longer story built around it later, but for now it’s just a short addition to the LoTR universe.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Legolas, Arwen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 534 Read Count: 1404
[Report This] Published: 09/10/04 Updated: 09/10/04
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 06/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Gurthu a Kuil: Death and Life

Soo...goood...you really are quite talented.

Author's Response: Why, thank you! Very much so!

Summary: After a young Eldarion poses a strange question, his parents and friends try to explain some of the Facts of Life to the five-year-old, and learn that sometimes you can over-think things. Rated because of discussion of sexuality, but at the level of a five-year-old, so if you pick up on anything it's your own fault for having a dirty mind! ;)
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Eldarion
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2659 Read Count: 3235
[Report This] Published: 10/10/04 Updated: 10/10/04
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 02/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Prince's Question

HA this was definitely the most amusing almost slash thing I have ever read. Whooo. :D

Author's Response: Thank you, so glad you enjoyed! :D

Trust To Hope by Novedhelion Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Éomer and Lothíriel, my spin. Mostly book canon...a bent toward the movie when it suited me...and some creative license. Hence the reason it is called fanFICTION, emphasis on the FICTION. Enjoy! FIRST PLACE WINNER/BEST HET STORY MY PRECIOUS AWARDS 2004
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Lothiriel
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 212099 Read Count: 26613
[Report This] Published: 08/11/04 Updated: 08/03/05
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 26/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

woo good so far *reads on*

Summary: (Part of the "Lay of Mary's End" challenge from Noldo) With a flash of light, a girl appears in Fangorn Forest just in time to meet up with our heroes. However, things don't go quite as she planned...For all those who have read one too many bad 'Sue fics. ;)
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Gandalf / Olorin, Original Character
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1215 Read Count: 1314
[Report This] Published: 21/11/04 Updated: 21/11/04
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 06/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mary-Sue in Fangorn

woo ya. It's kind of funny how they thought that she was some magical thing, hehehe. all mary sues should be shot.

Author's Response: Can you imagine Saruman sending out hordes of MS\'s to make the Fellowship\'s lives miserable? That would be evil, even for him! ;) Totally agree about the shooting. More than once, even!

Summary: Semi-canonical, set in the early Fourth Age, exploring the possibility that Arwen, as queen of Gondor, might not have had the time or the energy to care for her daughters. Warning: Some may consider to be anti-Arwen.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Faramir, Original Character, Other, Elboron
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3003 Read Count: 1638
[Report This] Published: 05/05/05 Updated: 05/05/05
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mother and Daughter

I really liked this a lot, it was very compelling. The emotions were real, Ireth was real. Although Arwen seems to have forgotten that she is the daughter of a great lord, too, and she didn't listen to him when he didn't want her to marry Aragorn! Yet she expects Ireth to do so with a Haradren prince. -_-

Great job though :D

By the Sea by Kokki Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Éomer & Lothíriel — A bittersweet look at Éomer and Lothíriel's relationship and how it blossomed into the greatest love of all time. The wedding night can be extremely awkward, particularly if your marriage was arranged for a political alliance.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Lothiriel
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 73101 Read Count: 25058
[Report This] Published: 21/05/05 Updated: 23/02/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 20/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Night

V. nice!

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Date: 08/05/06 Title: Chapter 2: The Morning After

Eek, Eomer is so odd, lol. One minute he's sensitive, the next he's oblivious. Sort of how guys are though, haha.

Summary: Life through Eowyn's eyes, and how she deals with rejection from Aragorn. Will soon get more juicy.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Gimli, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin, Faramir, Original Character
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure, Drama, Angst
Warnings: Rape
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 677 Read Count: 1496
[Report This] Published: 17/12/05 Updated: 17/12/05
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 13/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

it was good, your choice of first person was good. However, when Eowyn was "thinking" to herself, obviously, you switched back and forth from present and past tense alot, which can get confusing.

Summary: Gimli goes to Aman with Legolas. The Elves, naturally, do not approve of this state of affairs.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Other
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618 Read Count: 1466
[Report This] Published: 21/12/05 Updated: 21/12/05
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 18/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Gimli Goes To Aman

HA, "I demand a recount" hilarious. Okay, I think possibly you should change the "we have decided that you are a dwarf." it's more taking Treebeard's line than originality. Also, Galadriel is a very influential Noldo, but I doubt that they would let a dwarf into Aman just because she wanted them to. lol. I liked reading it though, it was quite amusing. teehee ^_^

Author's Response: Who says I\'m original? I\'m a thief! Perhaps Galadriel\'s not that<\\i> influential, but oh well, she had to be for the sake of the story. Thanks for reviewing! Faramiriel

Blood Thorns by angelsfyre1 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 27]
Summary: A possible spy is captured by the sons of Elrond just after the departure of the Fellowship. Is she truly a threat? That is what Glorfindel and the twins wish to discover. GlorfindelOC ,OC,M/F
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Elrond, Elrohir, Elladan, Glorfindel, Original Character, Erestor
Genres: Romance, Action/Adventure, Angst, Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25850 Read Count: 14435
[Report This] Published: 21/01/06 Updated: 29/01/07
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 27/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival of Chaos

This is certainly a good story idea, but it would be a much more pleasant experience if it was formatted better (more paragraphs instead of blocks). Also, I could beta read for punctuation for you if you'd like :) I always like to help.

Basically, though, it was a good start. :D