Penname: Nieriel [Contact] Real name: Amanda
Member Since: 19/03/06
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Summary: The little emo hobbit saves the day.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 326 Read Count: 1186
[Report This] Published: 27/01/06 Updated: 27/01/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 18/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am not emo and certainly not a fan of emos, but if you are going to write a story about them you might try to be a bit more mature about it. As in, at least have good punctuation, and refrain from saying the same thing over and over. Unless this isn't a story, and just a rant.

Summary: King Aragorn is going on with his usual business when a man appears in front of him. This turns out to be Sirius Black. They later meet Captain Jack Sparrow as well. Together, the three characters from different worlds go on an adventure in Middle Earth, becoming close friends.....Aragorn, Sirius, AND Jack-three hotties all in one........can you say HELL YES!?
Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas, Bilbo, Boromir, Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Faramir, Frodo, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other, Pippin, Rosie, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Treebeard, Witch King
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1764 Read Count: 5467
[Report This] Published: 04/02/06 Updated: 19/02/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 29/05/06 Title: Chapter 2: Legolas or Will? Legolas or Will? Legolas or Will?

just had to point out that you would say "Tengo un gato grande en mi pantalones" :P

Author's Response: gracias...

Author's Response: ...but what did you think of the story...?

Destiny's Arrow by DiableRouge Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Minas Tirith. Three days before the wedding of Arwen and Aragorn. Jealousy rears it's ugly head.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Legolas
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57708 Read Count: 23532
[Report This] Published: 07/02/06 Updated: 18/04/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 21/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: At the Gates

yup, I read all the way to chapter 18, because I'm naughty and didn't review along the way. I started reading this because I was bored and it sounded good, but then I was like, "hmm, I don't like Legolas/Arwen" but I kept reading because you have a wowza writin' style. :P

but anyways, at first I was like, "legolas is sentimental and pissed. legolas is obsessed with arwen. lawd, this is going to be one heck of an odd fic." but I kept reading because like I said, you write well.

But then when you jumped to the flashbacks, it made it so much more convincing. The legolas/arwen relationship thing. I don't think I would have believed it if you hadn't done that little "insight into the past". That and that alone was the one convincing factor that made the story all the more heartrending for their separation. if you had not done that, I would have been like wth? and stopped reading. but you made a great choice, so, yay! :D

The emotions were soo good, Eowyn so conniving, and a really original twist on the Aragorn/Arwen relationship. Parts with Arwen being all depressed and sad about her fate yet trying to be glad SO good (probably because of the flashbacks, lol) but also because you are a good writer. Loofed!

:) can't wait til the end.

Author's Response: First, thanks so much for your review. Second, let me just say that when the idea first occured to me, I thought it was a little odd too. But once I got to thinking about it, it really bothered me that Arwen was just a pretty little carrot that motivates Aragorn to do his thing and then shows up again at the end to be his brood mare. I kept thinking about how she\'s already hundreds, even thousands of years old when Aragorn is born and how if we\'re just going on the bare outline of a relationship that Tolkien wrote for them, they don\'t even know each other all that well at the time of their marriage. So I hooked her up with Legolas and voila! Personally, I can\'t wait until the end either! IM me sometime (if you ever see me on :)).

Summary: This story will take place after Legolas returns home from Gondor. This is my first fan fic so if you read it and don't like it please tell me
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Legolas
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 603 Read Count: 4868
[Report This] Published: 24/02/06 Updated: 14/04/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Friends of old

this chapter seems a bit over the top in terms of realism. first off, there is basically no introduction at all. He is talking about always loving Cathrina, yet when he sees her, he doesn't know who she is? I realize it's been a few years, but still. The characters are not developed, something that could be achieved in a longer composition. You may also want to stay grounded in one point of view per scene. You switch from Legolas to Cathrina midway through.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 2: A New Feeling

I'm sorry, but you really need to lengthen these chapters. Tell us what happened in the year. Create sympathy for the characters by showing us events that occurred. I don't think Legolas would be that ambiguous...and please...get a grammar checker. Not to trying to flame you here, trying to help.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 3: Bring it out

There is no empathy for the characters that I can feel. You have not delved into the character's lives, showed us things about them. This scene (it's not exactly a chapter) is almost entirely dialogue. Besides, Legolas already told her he loves her.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 4: the final act

There is no character development here, again. Too short and talky. FIVE YEARS!?!?! it's been like...6 since he first told her he loved her. o.o why would they wait that long?

Summary: one hit. really short. *Aragorn comes to Mirkwood to find everyone dead.*
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn
Genres: Drama, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277 Read Count: 1533
[Report This] Published: 01/03/06 Updated: 01/03/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Bunt to ashes

Soo sad =( but good. lol.

Author's Response: Thanks =]

Author's Response: Thanks =]

The Appendices by EstellaB Rated: PG [Reviews - 4]
Summary: The heroes of the War have been given a shocking and in some cases unpleasant gift whilst they are at Aragorn's coronation...a copy of the Appendices... Warning: This is more based on the film characters than the books characters. An attempt at humour. Please tell me if it's rubbish, and I won't post humour again. Also: This is set out like a film script, not my normal style of fic.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas, Gimli, Frodo, Sam, Merry, Pippin, Gandalf / Olorin
Genres: Humor, Parody, Other, General
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 786 Read Count: 1441
[Report This] Published: 01/03/06 Updated: 01/03/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Appendices

lol it was funny

Shattered Serenity by Elarinya Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 10]
Summary: Aratriel falls off her horse and blacks out. When she awakes she remembers only her fifteenth birthday and before that. Will she be able to learn to love Theodred again or cope with loosing her parents for a second time? What happens when she finds out she has a two-year old daughter? I know this is cliche but.... Why am I asking you all these questions?
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Elfwine, Lothiriel, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5404 Read Count: 5151
[Report This] Published: 10/03/06 Updated: 30/05/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 22/03/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Well written =) However, a few suggestions: It does not really seem likely that only three orcs would attack people, especially if there was no real reason to/no orc captain there. Also, when you do dialogue for Merawyn, it would probably be better to just say: She said in a childish babble.."jad;jfaskfd"... rather than actually typing it out. it could get confusing to read. But I really enjoyed reading this ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you! Maybe the orcs wouldn\'t, but it was the only thing I could come up with that would fit with the story plot. Yeah, I guess it might be confussing, it\'s really only her mom, dad and grandmother that can understand her very well. Thanx for the review! :D

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 04/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It was veery good ^_^ I like your characterization, like when you said, "...could tell she wanted to say something, so he sat there quietly for a moment..." things like that are good, they tell you about the characters and their personalities.

Author's Response: *bows* thank you! That chapter took me longer to write then I thought it would. . . Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Did you die? *poke*

Author's Response: hehe sry about the long wait. I have other fanfics I\'m working on, I have writers block on this one and I have tests for school I have to take... so I been REALLY busy. No I\'m not dead though. :)

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 22/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hehehe, me like (just realized I forgot to review this chappy) lol. Ok. Theodred so nice, never read a fic with him before.

Author's Response: Me glad you like. :) Yeah Theodred is a sweet heart, but I made him up so that would be why you haven\'t read any other fics about him. Theodred (the canon one) is Eomer\'s cousin. However the one I write about is Eomer\'s youngest son named after his dead cousin.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/05/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Commenting as I go along...okies. I liked how you havent just been like, œTheodred said, œI am your husband. Because that would be really blatant, it shows his nature well with that line œWith a soft, but sad smile he said to her, œMy name is Theodred. You are in Meduselds infirmary.



Also, the personification of pain is, as in most stories, quite effective. =)



Um...Éomer is more of Theodreds cousin...not his father. O.O



Hehe, œhe didnt need these kinds of problems this early in life. It shows Heulwyns older, wiser nature. Nice overall. muahaha.


Author's Response: Nonono... this isn\'t the Theodred in the books or movies. That Theodred is dead. Very dead and buried. This Eomer son NAMED after the Theodred in the books.

Yeah, just having him say \'I am your husband\' outright isn\'t in his character. Besides this way its longer and more angstie-ish. :) Lot harder on the characters though.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/05/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Commenting as I go along...okies. I liked how you havent just been like, œTheodred said, œI am your husband. Because that would be really blatant, it shows his nature well with that line œWith a soft, but sad smile he said to her, œMy name is Theodred. You are in Meduselds infirmary.



Also, the personification of pain is, as in most stories, quite effective. =)



Um...Éomer is more of Theodreds cousin...not his father. O.O



Hehe, œhe didnt need these kinds of problems this early in life. It shows Heulwyns older, wiser nature. Nice overall. muahaha.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/05/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

sorreh, I used a diff skin and it sort of reviewed twice. *is scared* moving on...and switching skins...

Author's Response: hehehe I don\'t mind the extra reviews! :D

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 02/05/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oops, lol, did not realize Theodred was his son, although I was sort of confused as to why Eomer was the king. haha. ok. moving on.

Author's Response: yeah I guess I didn\'t make the time very clear. Aragorn and Arwen married in 1415. this story take placein 1453 - about 38 years later :)

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 02/06/06 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

this is just great. lol. I hope she doesn't think he's some greasy old pervert xP

Forever Young by Numenora Rated: G [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Legolas watches as his husband, King Elessar sleeps. Drabble (100 words) For Tolkien_Weekly ‘Wrinkled’ Challenge.
Categories: Lord of the Rings Slash
Characters: Aragorn, Legolas
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: Slash (same sex pairing), AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 176 Read Count: 1306
[Report This] Published: 19/03/06 Updated: 19/03/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 20/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Forever Young

I don't know if you should rate a slash story, despite the fact that it is mild, as G...

Author's Response: Hi. I appreciate your concern about the rating and I may change it; however, this is clearly listed as slash in the category and in the warnings. I thank you for reading my story. Patty.

Summary: She has to do it. It is her honor. She could, would, and should take revenge of the son of the one who has destroyed her family and her lands. But even the strongest wills can be bended, and the coldest of hearts can be melted. What begins as a quest for a simple murder dances itself into a struggle of wills, nature, and hearts. But the past, the present, and the future hunt all of them...

The bowstring will be loosened, the arrow will fly, and the hunter must become the hunted.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12036 Read Count: 6912
[Report This] Published: 10/04/06 Updated: 16/05/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 10/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One - Last Flame

v. v. interesting...you characterized the girl quite well, without ever using a name. Nice job. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks! More to follow!