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Innocent Eyes by Kim Rated: R [Reviews - 43]
Summary: Mia Adams is a twenty year old British dancer, determined to make her mark in the dancing world. After Orlando saves her from unwanted attention from a guy she doesn't like, he takes on the role as the older brother she never had. When he starts interfering with her relationships, is he really just being over-protective or is there something else bothering him? Inspired by the song by Delta Goodrem.
Categories: Actor Fics
Characters: None
Genres: General, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30308 Read Count: 16285
[Report This] Published: 17/04/06 Updated: 14/02/08
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 15/05/06 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: Saturday 18th November, Home

so good. yay! Elijah seems a bit crazy, hehe.

Summary: Two slaves drown in a swollen river in an attempt to outrun their master as they escape to the North. The world does not change. Life goes on. Two slaves appear in Middle Earth. The world changes.

...for not all slavery is just in chains...
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Other
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2099 Read Count: 3300
[Report This] Published: 25/04/06 Updated: 27/04/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 19/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

geh, I had to review again because I wasn't really constructive the first time, lmao. anyways, this is the best short thing I have read in a long time. You have a really nice sense of flow and make pictures with words without over-stuffing it. Less is more, they say. hehe.

Soo goood. *tackles you and steals your writing brain*

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 18/05/06 Title: Chapter 2: I. River

So good, yay!

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 18/05/06 Title: Chapter 3: II: Capture

so nice, I like the characters. For some reason, I thought Isum would be the girl and Jovy the guy. lol. anyways, don't mind me, I'm sick ;)

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 18/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

gruesome, yet good. lol.

Summary: A newcomer with a perchance for Feanor’s treasure chest arrives in Mandos and decides to appropriate Feanor's rooms for himself and kill anyone who tries to resist him. Thankfully, everyone already is dead. Still, what with an oxygen-deprived Elf as an assistant, an idle wife, and a vain overlord! What's a Vala of the Dead supposed to do?
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Eonwe, Feanor, Gwindor, Namo / Mandos, Smaug
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4221 Read Count: 2208
[Report This] Published: 27/04/06 Updated: 27/04/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Problematic Dragon

Quite lovely and entertaining, very well written. I especially liked the part when Namo was talking to Vaire. :P

Author's Response: Hehe. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much.

The Red Book by LadyofLight Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A series of one-shot stories covering a wide bearth of subjects and characters, told from all different points of view. You will find a table of contents at the beginning, which will be updated every time a new story is added.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Elrond, Smaug
Genres: General
Warnings: Character Death, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2711 Read Count: 3943
[Report This] Published: 07/05/06 Updated: 09/05/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 08/05/06 Title: Chapter 2: Insane What Love Can Do

This was so nice! I always love it when people take a moment from the movies or book, and make it so that we see so much more of what a character was thinking during that 5 or 10 seconds. whee. =D

Author's Response: I know that that little moment in the extended edition looks like they\'ve both completely given up to most people, but I never always thought there was something different happening there. Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 03/06/06 Title: Chapter 3: Lonely Roads

soo good. :D It drew me in. There was not extremely long descriptions or anything, but in a way that made it better, especially using the First Person POV for Smaug.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Elrond has a duaghter, one not described in the books. Read and learn more :D
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Elrond, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gil-Galad, Glorfindel, Original Character
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, General, Humor, Mystery, Poetry, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1212 Read Count: 1908
[Report This] Published: 08/05/06 Updated: 08/05/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 28/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice so far, a spelling mistake: Celebrain = Celebrian. Also, you might want to have a more Elvish name for Alexandria.

Love Online by joshsgirl04 Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Shannon Cartwright is just your average college senior, well except for the fangirl thing. She meets a mysterious man in a chatroom. Her life will turn upside down when she finds out who he is.


Categories: Actor Fics
Characters: Dominic Monaghan
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17779 Read Count: 8791
[Report This] Published: 09/05/06 Updated: 21/09/07
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 29/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Interesting story idea, I'll keep reading tomorrow when I'm not so dead *yawns* hehehe. me like.

Forbidden by Larien Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Nienna and Haldir are in love, but it is forbidden for them to be together, under the order of Nienna’s mother, Galadriel. Nienna’s niece, Arwen returns to Lothlorien with her husband, Aragorn, and Aragorn’s friend, Legolas. Nienna sneaks off with them as they leave, pretending to have an urgent message for Elrond for two reasons: Haldir is returning with them, and she wants to be with him, and she wants to be free, away from her strict parents.


But Aragorn finds out and makes sure that Nienna and Haldir stay as far away from each other as possible. He keeps her under the watchful eye of Legolas. Nienna never liked Legolas to begin with, but after spending so much time with him to and at Rivendell, he grows on her.


Haldir is jealous and wants nothing more than Nienna’s love. Legolas feels the same way. Nienna must now choose between Haldir and Legolas. Her love for Haldir is forbidden, but her love for Legolas would be welcomed with open arms by her parents.
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Celeborn, Elrond, Galadriel, Gimli, Haldir, Legolas, Original Character
Genres: Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7265 Read Count: 4153
[Report This] Published: 21/05/06 Updated: 23/05/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: To Rivendell

Hi there -- I just had some comments about your fic so far. Well...your summary gives too much away, I think. You should give those details away throughout the story instead of right off the bat.

Also, this first chapter was a bit erratic. The characters emotions change extremely rapidly and their motivations are unclear (why exactly can Nienna not return until she has produced a family? Why can't Haldir return? Why is Galadriel so mean to Nienna -- surely it can't be because of Haldir only.) And when they are first walking through the woods, Nienna tells Haldir to "prove" he loves her by kissing her...despite the fact that they have already said "I Love you" before. It just makes her seem manipulative (and with the part that said "their lips crashed together" that was slightly strange vocabulary). Also...you don't really need tags at the end of the dialogue so much.

You have a great concept here, but I think you're dumbing it down a little too much (by focusing on cheap emotion like "crashing lips" or Arwen yelling after about a 10 second exchange for no reason really) without really explaining important things like how the heck she'd make it out of Lothlorien like that, for example. I don't mean to be harsh...just want to help :)

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Return to Lothlorien

*in addition to the last paragraph of my first review - or without really setting the stage

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Return to Lothlorien

Nienna acts extremely childish...and why would Galadriel randomly decide to let them be together??

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: For the Love of Nienna

Ok...well...why exactly would Nienna go insane if she found out that someone else loved her????? That kind of defies logic. And why would she go crazy and assume that haldir is lying and that he must not love her?? And where was there any indication, any reason, that she would go to Legolas over Haldir? I'm sorry...but this is all highly improbable and very strange.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Unable to Make up Her Mind

Ok...um....yeah. She breaks up with him after one fight? She randomly charges back and forth between two guys for apparently no reason? And Haldir is acting pretty stupid if he just randomly accepts her back without saying "gee, maybe I'll get hurt again"? And why is Galadriel being so creepy to her own daughter?

Landing in London by Chloe Kay Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 13]
Summary:
Laughter.Romance.Coffee.Drama.Love.Hate.Friendship.Phone Calls.Trips.Moviestars.Money.Fame.



When Roxie's family moved to London as she was starting high school, she thought her life was over. That is, until she met Orlando. They became best friends, and now she finds herself living with him back in the heart of the city, 10 years later. Its almost like old times again...minus the fact that he's a superstar. Whatever.



This is the story of their lives. And no matter what happens or where they end up, they know they'll always be landing in london.
Categories: Actor Fics
Characters: Billy Boyd, Dominic Monaghan, Elijah Wood, Liv Tyler, Original Character, Orlando Bloom, Other, Viggo Mortensen
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4610 Read Count: 4561
[Report This] Published: 21/05/06 Updated: 06/06/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 29/05/06 Title: Chapter 1: Phonecalls and Flashbacks.

geh this is so good! please continue. I'll be more specific if you want ;) just too dead right now to do an analysis.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 02/06/06 Title: Chapter 2: Calls After Midnight Are Strictly Prohibited.

hehhe, I do that trying-to-find-clothes thing a lot. I do discover things I thought I lost in my closet, and then I complain about having nothing to wear. :P I loove your story, it's so realistic and un-mary-sue like.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 02/06/06 Title: Chapter 3: Sticky Ricky and Other High School Terrors.

teehee. I would have died by now. and that is the really great thing about this story -- you can relate with the characters and enjoy their story.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 06/06/06 Title: Chapter 4: Chinese and Chickflicks.

tee, roxie is really one cool gal. nice job with this chapter.

Summary: A poem I wrote after seeing the Two Towers for the first time. There is mention of fighting and death but nothing serious. Just so you know.
Categories: Movie-verse
Characters: None
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: Death and Beyond
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87 Read Count: 1794
[Report This] Published: 17/06/06 Updated: 17/06/06
Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Date: 21/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is really pretty and lyrical. it has a nice rhythm and it conveys the emotions of Helms Deep (and other battles) really well. Nice! (much better than I could ever write poetry, haha) :D

Author's Response: Thanks alot. I\'m very proud about this poem. But it\'s true! I did write this poem after watching the battle at Helm\'s Deep.