wtf? (a good wtf) lmao. I have no clue what corner of your mind this fic came from but it is hilarious. hurry and update! :D

Author's Response: As I stated previously, naught but dramatic genius.

I hope you continue this, but some points: We already know all the races, you don't have to explain them. Orcs are spelled with c's. And "1 girl had survived," and other instances where you used the number 1, you should type out the word.

Also, if you want to hook your readers a bit better, show, don't tell. This means don't give us a summary of Kelsey's ability and life and all the races, write a scene where it is shown to us by words and actions.

Author's Response: I thank you very much for your review. I know I wrote orcs with a K but that may come because I\'m Dutch and we write it with a K. The scenes that you mention will come. They are on the way but aren\'t ready yet. I\'m writing this while the second came in so i\'ll tell you also some things that you said in the second. Kelsey was a name that I just made up. I liked the name so I just used it. I hope that doesn\'t bother you. With emotions I\'m not so good. Also not with details. I\'m trying to perfect that but because this is not one of my newest it isn\'t that great yet. The bad guy died in the second chapter so I can\'t make him very evil anymore =P And I know that Haldir comes from LothLorien. But I like him and in later chapters I need him like that. If you don\'t mind =P Thanks again for your reviews and happy reading =D KelseyWhiteleaf

hehehehe this was funny and smoothly written ;) Good work.

Author's Response: My first reviewer! Thanks. Glad you liked it. I had great fun writing it. I lover (relatively) clueless Aragorn. *Snicker* I have more stories (only two) over at FF.Net . I\'ll probably post them here when I get around to it.

hahaa, that mascara thing was funny, it sounds like something Denethor could have done. :P

Author's Response: HA I know. I think I\'m going to write him a fic at one point or another.

hmm...I think that this could be an interesting concept, except it seems like you are remaking the Lord of the Rings. Elendil was way back with Numenor, Huor was a man in the First Age (The Silmarillion). Sauron is extremely dead. Maybe you could make The Mouth of Sauron be the new villain? He doesn't die in the books, he dies in the movie, so you're all good. And changing the names of the characters along with that would make this story 10x better right off the bat.

Author's Response: You know, I don\'t know why I didn\'t see this happening and why I didn\'t explain myself better but thank you for pointing it out! Elendil is not the same as the one in Numenor, it is a boy that is after the War of the Ring and is given the same name. I feel a fool for not explaining that and perhaps the chosen name was a bit wrong but there is reason to it, I promise. Thank you though so much for the input and bit of aide you offered, it\'s nice to hear such well versed fans of Tolkien still exist.