Reviews by barbarossa
Summary: Brunhilde, princess of Iceland is brought to Middle Earth and finds herself in the company of two Hobbits and a band Uruk-hai. Trouble seems to be around every corner for the seventeen year old, especially when she meets Eomer, Third Marshall of the Riddermark.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Frodo, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Gríma, Haldir, Háma, Legolas, Lothiriel, Manwe, Merry, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden, Théodred, Treebeard, Varda
Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Graphic Sex, Rape, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29289 Read Count: 22334
Published: May 18 2007 Updated: Jan 02 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: barbarossa Signed
You've made one mistake that makes your story uninteresting: you just added one character and did not change the flow of the story. The orcs would have seen fresh meet in her and would have tried to kill her. Let her be rescued by the Rohirrim and knowing nothing about the hobbits would have made the story much more interesting. You would not have to use the dialogues from the movie and were free to tell your own story.

Author's Response: It does go out of the movie scenes in the next few chapters. It\'s written so they don\'t meet just yet. I kinda got into the idea that she sticks with Merry and Pippin for a bit. Then... well you\'ll just have to read on if you want. I\'ve already written eight chapters on it, but am working on the others. I would change it, but I can\'t because it already has a certain flow to it. Otherwise I would change it. Saxongirl345
Date: May 20 2007