Grammar problems galore here. Who on earth is "pippan"?
This isn't even a story, its a self insersion fantasy and you should seriously consider doing away with it.
Sorry if thats harsh, but its true.
Why does she suddenly know who everyone is? Why is she not panicking as to where she is? And why would someone ask an unconsious person why they are unconsious, They wouldn't be able to respond. And for the hundreth time, the title "Lady" is for royalty and landowners, not random children.
I quite like this, it reminds me of another "epic" fanfic I've read.
At first I admit I thought "Oh no, Mary Sue" as it began with a description of a girl and a tragedy, but you've made it work.
Just don't screw it up. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, yes, I hope I will not mess it up! :D I do hate the girly \"Mary-Sues,\" and wanted to take a different twist on it. That is, if our Wolf here can be described as a Mary-Sue...