Reviews by Aralia
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: Dec 31 1969 Updated: Dec 31 1969 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Aralia Signed
Oh dear.
Grammar problems galore here. Who on earth is "pippan"?

This isn't even a story, its a self insersion fantasy and you should seriously consider doing away with it.

Sorry if thats harsh, but its true.
Date: Apr 07 2006
Summary: A young girl resorts to dreaming to escape her life at home. She makes a wish, unaware of her past, and her destiny in a distant world. I hope it won't be too confusing to read, because I use a lot of flashbacks.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character, Sam, Frodo
Genres: Mystery, Fantasy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16033 Read Count: 9617
Published: Aug 27 2005 Updated: Jun 13 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Homeless Reviewer: Aralia Signed
Why does she suddenly know who everyone is? Why is she not panicking as to where she is? And why would someone ask an unconsious person why they are unconsious, They wouldn't be able to respond. And for the hundreth time, the title "Lady" is for royalty and landowners, not random children.
Date: Apr 30 2006
Summary: She has to do it. It is her honor. She could, would, and should take revenge of the son of the one who has destroyed her family and her lands. But even the strongest wills can be bended, and the coldest of hearts can be melted. What begins as a quest for a simple murder dances itself into a struggle of wills, nature, and hearts. But the past, the present, and the future hunt all of them...

The bowstring will be loosened, the arrow will fly, and the hunter must become the hunted.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Boromir, Frodo, Gandalf / Olorin, Gimli, Legolas, Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12036 Read Count: 7920
Published: Apr 10 2006 Updated: May 16 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One - Last Flame Reviewer: Aralia Signed
I quite like this, it reminds me of another "epic" fanfic I've read.

At first I admit I thought "Oh no, Mary Sue" as it began with a description of a girl and a tragedy, but you've made it work.

Just don't screw it up. ;)


Author's Response: Thanks for the review, yes, I hope I will not mess it up! :D I do hate the girly \"Mary-Sues,\" and wanted to take a different twist on it. That is, if our Wolf here can be described as a Mary-Sue...

-AN
Date: Apr 30 2006