Reviews by Ria
Summary: In the near future, as the Age of Men begins to crumble, the truth is revealed about a long-vanished world that no one, except perhaps a few, even knows existed. MEFA 2008 third-place winner, incomplete AU category.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Elladan, Elrohir, Gandalf / Olorin, Maglor, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Mystery
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52101 Read Count: 39302
Published: Nov 19 2006 Updated: Aug 06 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 15: The Elf's Tale Reviewer: Ria Signed
Yes! Resolution and absolution for Maglor.
Date: Jul 15 2007
Title: Chapter 7: Peredhil Reviewer: Ria Signed
Nice developments! I like the seriousness of the quest that's drawing Gandalf out.
Date: Apr 07 2007
Title: Chapter 13: Comb, Knife, and Rope Reviewer: Ria Signed
You've sustained the dramatic tension of this story, while constantly introducing new elements. It really seems epic, Jules.

Author's Response: Thank you. To me, the middle seems like an interlude.
Date: May 18 2007
Title: Chapter 16: The Betrayal Reviewer: Ria Signed
Oh, drama! I feel greatly for Maglor. It sounds as if you are planning to work in the Silmarils -- hmm . . .
Date: Aug 17 2007
Title: Chapter 20: Faris Reviewer: Ria Signed
With every chapter, you keep my interest piqued. This is a truly original tale.

Faris seems like a Faramir figure, and not only because of the coincidence of sound between their names.

Author's Response: Hmmm...this is actually the first time I noticed the similarity of their names. But yes, I wanted to make Faris into somebody like Faramir or Beleg Cuthalion--brave, loyal, and truly dedicated. He\'s meant to almost be a contrast with Robert Tilton who, despite his original enthusiasm for Gandalf\'s work, goes the wrong way about expressing his enthusiasm--i.e. ignoring his family\'s displeasure--and, in the end, loses interest completely because he feels that \"his job is done.\"
Date: Jan 27 2008
Title: Chapter 29: Being Had Reviewer: Ria Signed
I like your use of the phrase "the end of all things," though, to my shame, I can't remember whether it's from the book as well as the movie.

Author's Response: I think it is, but I'll have to check again to be sure. It's a little cliched, but it seemed a usable cliche, so I put it in.
Date: Aug 03 2008
Title: Chapter 18: The Wraiths in the Rock Reviewer: Ria Signed
That's a sad way to see the hobbits at last. How do they know that those are the last hobbits in the world, though?

Author's Response: I suppose I shouldn\'t have said \"know,\" but \"feel.\" Because you\'re right that they wouldn\'t know for sure. I can change it pretty quickly.
Date: Dec 24 2007
Summary: There are many diehard Tolkien fans that complain that either Peter Jackson's films destroyed their cherished images of Middle Earth or didn't capture the spirit of Middle Earth. My answer? It could have been a thousand times worse.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Arwen, Bilbo, Bill the Pony, Denethor, Elrond, Eomer, Eowyn, Faramir, Galadriel, Gollum, Gríma, Nazgûl, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Original Character, Other Canon Character, Sauron, The Fellowship, Théoden, Witch King
Genres: Horror, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27966 Read Count: 64671
Published: Nov 22 2006 Updated: Apr 19 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8: The Plot Thickens Reviewer: Ria Signed
I love the thoughtfulness and sly wit of this story. When you begin to describe the musical cues and stock Disney characters, I can really envision it in all its awful pageantry.
Date: May 14 2007
Title: Chapter 9: Ominous Scenes Reviewer: Ria Signed
I'm glad that the Disney version includes Denethor's palantir, even though I KNOW he's not going to burn. Great story so far.

Author's Response: Yeah...isn\'t it sad to know that Disney actually did something better than PJ did?
Date: Jun 07 2007
Title: Chapter 12: The Triumph of True Love...and Money Reviewer: Ria Signed
I can't believe I've been so out of it that I missed reading this as soon as you updated. It's a great finish to a very clever (and fiendishly believable) parody.

Author's Response: Thank you. I just hope it's not so believable that Disney comes across it!
Date: Jul 13 2008
Summary: The Fellowship never had it so bad. Ever!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Original Character, The Fellowship
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 688 Read Count: 1719
Published: Nov 22 2006 Updated: Nov 22 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Where Legolas meets The Creature Reviewer: Ria Signed
Very funny, Anais!
Date: Apr 07 2007
Summary: Looking back, Glorfindel remembers the pain of the Fall of Gondolin, but he weeps not only for his old home. Rated PG-13 to be safe.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Glorfindel, Idril, Original Character, Other, Tuor, Turgon
Genres: None
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1722 Read Count: 1718
Published: Nov 23 2006 Updated: Nov 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Truth Unfolds Reviewer: Ria Signed
You completed the challenge very efficiently -- and movingly.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) Glad you enjoyed it enough to comment it.
Date: Jan 07 2007
Summary: A poem about Elu and Melian in both Sindarin and English.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Melian, Other
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 205 Read Count: 2048
Published: Nov 23 2006 Updated: Nov 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Melian and Elu Reviewer: Ria Signed
It's good. You should add it to Ithildin's challenge, "The Fair Words of Elves".

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I will, now that you mention it.
Date: Feb 04 2007
In Flux by GreenWoodElleth, Adora Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 46]
Summary: Yeah, sure. I'd thought about it. I'd totally considered it. Going to Middle Earth by some magical means...yada, yada, yada the whole nine yards(with sexy elves to boot.) It was something I considered much in the way somebody would consider a holiday they hoped to but knew hey would never have.
I hadn't thought about dying in a bus accident. I hadn't thought about my friends being there. I hadn't thought about waking up with a new body, a new name, and a new history.
And to make it all the more dramatic...I am soo dead if I don't get my Latin homework in on time.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel, Gandalf / Olorin, Haldir, Legolas
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: AU (alternate universe), Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11188 Read Count: 26982
Published: Nov 29 2006 Updated: Sep 11 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: emotional break down Reviewer: Ria Signed
I like it that you made the language barrier real. I'm still feeling a little challenged by sorting out all of the friends.

Author's Response: Yeah, I\'m going to have to work on that. At first I was only going to have three friends, then five then I thought I\'d just pick nine. it seemed tolkieny enough. Nine ring wraiths nine fellowship members, that sort of thing. Thanks for the review
Date: Aug 16 2007
Summary: Tokien finally gets a chance to watch the Lord of the Rings movies and react with amazement and horror at what has become of his books.
Categories: Book-verse, Movie-verse, Crossovers Characters: Other Canon Character
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4086 Read Count: 5903
Published: Dec 03 2006 Updated: May 19 2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Fellowship of the Ring Reviewer: Ria Signed
I think Tolkien would be able to handle the cutting out of Tom Bombadil . . . it's so like the flexibility of oral epics. I like the way that he figures out the changes, even though he doesn't like them all. Me, I've never gotten over the fact that Frodo figures out the riddle of the doors instead of Merry, even though I know why.

I'm looking forward to what you have to say about the second and third movies -- I think Tolkien would hate the glorification of the battle for Helm's Deep: It always seemed like a backdrop for the Legolas-Gimli friendship in the book.

Author's Response: Yeah, I think that went on way too long, it only took up one chapter in the book, but I guess it appealed to a lot of people. I\'m trying to decide how Tolkien should deal with the whole \"Aragorn fell\" sequence. I\'m updating soon!
Date: Jun 14 2007
Title: Chapter 2: The Two Towers Reviewer: Ria Signed
Good chapter -- I like the way you continue to make Tolkien a believable character.

I think that Tolkien would see the Aragorn fell sequence as a swipe from the story of Beren and Luthien. It seems to me that Beren gets knocked out or wounded nearly to death several times, only to be revived by Luthien's love and magic.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice.
Date: Jun 23 2007
Soap Bubbles by Le Rouret Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Of the members of the Fellowship, we are privy to the interrelationships of all of them save Legolas and Boromir. This little fic, concocted of equal parts saccharine and lime, attempts to elucidate the lack of information contained in canon.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: The Fellowship
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: The Green Knight
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12420 Read Count: 6260
Published: Dec 15 2006 Updated: Dec 15 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Imladris Reviewer: Ria Signed
You write from Legolas' point of view very well. I'm reading this story for the second time, and I enjoyed both the narrative and the soap bubble motif very much.
Date: Apr 16 2007
Summary: A parody of Irving Berlin's song "White Christmas."
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Humor, Parody, Poetry
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64 Read Count: 1501
Published: Dec 21 2006 Updated: Dec 21 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ria Signed
That's entertaining -- and it scans right too! Nice one.

Date: Jan 01 2007
The Actor by Ophelia Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: hard to summarize- read my author's note.
Categories: Off Topic Characters: None
Genres: Essay
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 484 Read Count: 1375
Published: Dec 26 2006 Updated: Dec 26 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ria Signed
Ophelia, this is a great turning-point scene. I just read your author info and two things came to mind.

1. Cape Cod! My family used to go to Cape Cod in the summers -- Wellfleet, especially. You're right: It really is its own world.

2. You're also right that it can be hard to write fanfiction, but I think it's a great writing workshop environment. When you're doing completely original work, you have to create everything, while when you write fanfiction, the world and many of its characters are pre-made, giving you more time to focus on your technique.

Good luck and keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I\'m glad you liked the scene- it really does seem like more of a scene than a stand-alone, essay doesn\'t it? I just need to write a story around it... That\'s cool that you know the Cape. I used to live sort-of near Wellfleet. It\'s a pretty town. Thanks for your advice concerning fanfiction, though personally, I disagree. As much as I love playing around in Tolkien\'s world, I always have the distinct feeling that I\'m jamming an extra puzzle piece into an already-completed puzzle. I do it for fun, but the original creative spark isn\'t there. The world isn\'t mine. I guess that\'s probably just a personal feeling, though, because I\'ve certainly read a lot of fantastic writing on this site, yours included. Anyway, thanks for the review! Ophelia
Date: Apr 07 2007
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: Dec 31 1969 Updated: Dec 31 1969 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Ria Signed
This is a really good story concept, and so full of dramatic irony. It makes me wonder what would have happened if Smeagol hadn't been there . . . would Deagol have become Gollum?

Author's Response: I\'d always wondered that myself you see. That\'s what inspired me to attempt at writing this, I guess. Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment! I really appreciate it! Keep safe...SK xxx
Date: Apr 02 2007
Summary: Elf &hearts Man. What could possibly go wrong?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Angst, Mystery, Romance, Tragedy
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 768 Read Count: 3578
Published: Dec 31 2006 Updated: Oct 09 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Reviewer: Ria Signed
What a dramatic beginning: great start!

Author's Response: Yeah, maybe I overdid it a little. Thanks for your review!
Date: Jan 02 2007
Summary: Those who remain behind have to face the somewhat embarrassing consequences. A tale of elves lounging around in Ancient Greece.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Celeborn, Glorfindel, Lindir, Lindir
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1014 Read Count: 1555
Published: Jan 02 2007 Updated: Jan 02 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mistaken Identities Reviewer: Ria Signed
Oh, very clever!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading :)
Date: Jan 06 2007
Summary: A response to Faramiriel's Culinary challenge. Faramir ATTEMPTS to teach Eowyn how to cook. Disaster ensues!!!
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Aragorn, Faramir
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1557 Read Count: 2732
Published: Jan 03 2007 Updated: Jan 03 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Mission: Traumatise Reviewer: Ria Signed
Well, that does end in disaster . . . I notice Arwen manages to stay far away from the kitchen. I bet Strider's a pretty good cook, though.

Author's Response: Oh, you really think that? Maybe I\'ll write a story to show you JUST how wrong I think you are!
Date: Jan 06 2007
Summary: Hey people the funny lotr story is back. Her eis part 2 out of 3
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Arwen, Elrond, Faramir, Galadriel, Gollum, Haldir, Orcs/Uruk-Hai, Saruman, Sauron, The Fellowship
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 513 Read Count: 5001
Published: Jan 06 2007 Updated: Jan 07 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Ria Signed
I like the characterization of the Ring as vain. Maybe there's a Tenth Walker tale (with the Ring as the Mary Sue) in that.

I prefer narrative to screenplay style, but of course you chose to continue in the same style as the first part of the series. I'm curious to read "Feuding at the Fishing Hole" -- part 3.

RS
Date: Jan 06 2007
I Hate Yule by sylc Rated: G [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Glorfindel visits Erestor, who hates Yule. The pair bicker.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Erestor, Glorfindel
Genres: Humor
Warnings: AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1247 Read Count: 2006
Published: Jan 06 2007 Updated: Jan 06 2007 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: I Hate Yule Reviewer: Ria Signed
This is quite an engaging vignette.

Author's Response: Thanks, Ria. I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
Date: Jan 06 2007