I love that the english words have almost the same quality as the elvish.
you're right that it relates to LOTR, and I love that it can do that without actually using names.
This is beautiful!
While I was reading it, I heard it as a chant. It also has a similar rhythm/feel as many of the poems in Elvish. Nice work!
oh, and thanks for the review :)
Author's Response: You are most welcome! =) Thank you for reviewing. I was not as really certain how it was to be spoken, or anything like that, but I felt like writing it, and I was moved, in a way.
wow. I love that it's sort of dream-like, and a wonderfully creepy, suprise ending. great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! This was the first story I had written with this kind of concept, so I\'m glad you thought my first attempt was good!