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Stolen Desert Gold by Nieriel Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 35]
Summary: It is F. A. 6, and Middle-Earth stands at the portal of a new era. Roshni, a young woman of the Haradrim, is ripped from her homeland as her northern neighbors continue the after-war raids. In the famed White City, she soons finds that everything is not as it once seemed. Enjoy Chapter 6!
Categories: Book-verse
Characters: Bergil, Faramir, Original Character
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23181 Read Count: 5077
[Report This] Published: 21/03/06 Updated: 24/06/06
Reviewer: Siurtan Signed
Date: 18/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Far From Home

Hey jaja, JJ here. Excellent work. I love the detail you put into it, and your style is superb!

Author's Response: hehe, after I pushed you onto the site xD. You must write something too jjers.

Reviewer: Siurtan Signed
Date: 18/04/06 Title: Chapter 2: The Usurper

Again, very well written. Details make me happy!

Author's Response: yay!

Reviewer: Siurtan Signed
Date: 18/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: The Scroll

Yes, yelling at him to move his butt all the way... I do think that Roshni and Asli were pretty sad, perhaps not quite to the full extent of the 'sadness capabilities', but pushing it too far wouldn't be good, so I like the general level of sorrow.
And arguments are awesome!
Great work!

Author's Response: hmm...yes...I did not want to make it seem overly dramatic, although usually I would think you\'d be melodramatic if your husband-brother-father/father-in-law was about to be executed...well, maybe not about the in-laws haha.

Reviewer: Siurtan Signed
Date: 25/04/06 Title: Chapter 4: Derision

Very good. I too, thought that Faramir would make it.. but I suppose you must throw that in there somehow. Shelley was very funny... made me laugh. As for the emotion, I think you did pretty well summing it up. I like the way you detailed it.


Author's Response: ty again, jjers :D well...I contemplated having them survive, but you need *some* badness, I should think, lol. wheee *runs off again*

Reviewer: Siurtan Signed
Date: 05/06/06 Title: Chapter 5: Mistaken Identity

O_o A cloaked figure.. I could fathom a guess as to who it is, but I'm always wrong with these kinds of things.
Very interesting ^^

Author's Response: teehee, thank you for your review. ^_^

Reviewer: Siurtan Signed
Date: 22/07/06 Title: Chapter 6: No-name and Gathoni

Are you aware of just how evil you are? Well, let me tell you. You just left it there. And that, my friend, is evil.

Nah, it was superb, again. Although, I do think your a little bit evil. What with the stabbing in the gut and all.

Author's Response: lol