Hey jaja, JJ here. Excellent work. I love the detail you put into it, and your style is superb!
Author's Response: hehe, after I pushed you onto the site xD. You must write something too jjers.
Again, very well written. Details make me happy!
Author's Response: yay!
Yes, yelling at him to move his butt all the way... I do think that Roshni and Asli were pretty sad, perhaps not quite to the full extent of the 'sadness capabilities', but pushing it too far wouldn't be good, so I like the general level of sorrow.
And arguments are awesome!
Author's Response: hmm...yes...I did not want to make it seem overly dramatic, although usually I would think you\'d be melodramatic if your husband-brother-father/father-in-law was about to be executed...well, maybe not about the in-laws haha.
Very good. I too, thought that Faramir would make it.. but I suppose you must throw that in there somehow. Shelley was very funny... made me laugh. As for the emotion, I think you did pretty well summing it up. I like the way you detailed it.
Author's Response: ty again, jjers :D well...I contemplated having them survive, but you need *some* badness, I should think, lol. wheee *runs off again*
O_o A cloaked figure.. I could fathom a guess as to who it is, but I'm always wrong with these kinds of things.
Very interesting ^^
Author's Response: teehee, thank you for your review. ^_^
Are you aware of just how evil you are? Well, let me tell you. You just left it there. And that, my friend, is evil.
Nah, it was superb, again. Although, I do think your a little bit evil. What with the stabbing in the gut and all.
Author's Response: lol