Reviews by Ariel
Summary: Faramir finds out that there is something his heroic wife never learned, and teaching it to her is not the easiest of things... A humorous, erotic ficlet, Post-Quest
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Faramir
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2277 Read Count: 1452
Published: Oct 10 2004 Updated: Oct 10 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Sun on the Water Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Ah ha! You were invited here too, I see! Lovely story, as I said before. I think the relationship is presented so organically it just seethes comfort and security. You know they were happy all the rest of their lives. :)
Date: Oct 11 2004
Dark by MelanyeBaggins Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: In the dark of the Mines of Moria, Merry is plagued by nightmares.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Legolas, Merry
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1031 Read Count: 1875
Published: Oct 20 2004 Updated: Oct 20 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Dark Reviewer: Ariel Signed
I am always up for a Merry story and this one was a very sweet interlude. Of course Legolas would know of Tom B. - Iarwain, and though I have little interest in elves, anyone who praises Bombadil gains immeasurably in my respect! Nicely done!

Author's Response: I was challenged to write a story from the point of view of one of the hobbits in Moria, and I just *had* to have Legolas in there somehow! Thank you so much for your review!
Date: Oct 20 2004
Summary: Merry and Frodo have a conversation after the famous Birthday Party. Written for the hobbit_ficathon Birthday Party challenge
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Merry, Frodo
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1262 Read Count: 2718
Published: Nov 21 2004 Updated: Nov 21 2004 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Fireside Chat Reviewer: Ariel Signed
A nice touch. I've only recently discovered your pieces and I like them very much. You have a gentle touch and your characterizations are very well done. Thank you for this.
Date: Feb 04 2005
Summary: AU. Hi, I'm Andy, and this is the one-shot that made me cry.
Categories: Movie-verse Characters: Frodo, Sam, Gollum
Genres: Horror, Angst
Warnings: Character Death, AU (alternate universe)
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2262 Read Count: 1507
Published: Jan 17 2005 Updated: Jan 17 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Dark Night Seems Endless Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Well, after your review, and reading your bio, I had to see what you wrote yourself. Nicely done and very dark. Coincidently the webgroup I belong to (Frodo's Harem) were just discussing this - how Jackson made much more of this similarity between Frodo and Smeagol than Tolkien himself did - and that there were some very fundamental differences between them that Jackson doesn't seem to acknowledge. My reading of this fic is very timely to that discussion. Anyway, very interesting story, well written and disturbing. Thank you for it!

Author's Response: Thank you! It disturbs me as well. One of the things that captured my attention the most in the stories was the long-lasting effect the Ring has on people, especially Frodo. I've been reading your stories for a great deal of this evening, and I must say it's all awesome, and I'm really flattered you took the time to review something of mine. Thank you very much! And Frodo's Harem? Sounds very intriguing. In fact I'm at the webpage right now. And just have to say, "Finally! Other people who understand!" Dude, this makes my night.
Date: Jan 17 2005
Earth's Daughter by Aramel Rated: G [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Fíriel had rejected the passage into the west, and in Middle-earth all things age... A story of Fíriel, set seventy years after the tale told in Tolkien's poem "The Last Ship".
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Other
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1853 Read Count: 2140
Published: Jan 23 2005 Updated: Jan 23 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Earth's Daughter Reviewer: Ariel Signed
You've got some very wise and heartwarming stuff in this little story. Very nicely done.
Date: Apr 10 2006
Eggses by Andy Longwood Rated: G [Reviews - 6]
Summary: “. . . suddenly Gollum remembered thieving from nests long ago, and sitting under the riverbank teaching his grandmother, teaching his grandmother to suck – ‘Eggses!’ he hissed. ‘Eggses, it is!’"
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Other
Genres: Humor, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2770 Read Count: 3449
Published: Feb 02 2005 Updated: Feb 02 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Eggses Reviewer: Ariel Signed
oo! This was nicely done! Very skillfully drawn and believable. I have always found Smeagol to be a fascinating, underexplored character and your works, at least the ones I have read, do a lovely (if I could use that term! LOL!) job of it.
Date: Feb 08 2005
Summary: Ilúvatar’s gift does not always seem a blessing. When the Ringbearer comes to Valinor to find peace, he is a reminder that mortality can be a cause for mourning – and that to truly know happiness, one must also know sorrow.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character, Frodo
Genres: Romance, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2736 Read Count: 2067
Published: Feb 16 2005 Updated: Feb 16 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: I Will Know Suffering Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Oh, this is astonishingly beautiful! Thank you for this lovely piece!
Date: Mar 11 2005
Summary: While fleeing Shelob in the Pass of Cirith Ungol, Frodo and Sam discover a mysterious portal that leads them to a place they never imagined existed: a starship. A Lord of the Rings / Star Trek: Enterprise crossover story.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: Frodo, Other, Sam
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 57663 Read Count: 11285
Published: Feb 19 2005 Updated: May 03 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Out of the Frying Pan... Reviewer: Ariel Signed
oo! This is VERY interesting! Two of my favorite fanfic subjects!

Did you know about the tons of ST fanfic that used to be around? That was my first introduction to the medium way back in the 70's. It remains one of my favorite fanfic subjects though I tend to read only LOTR these days. Thank you for bringing the two of them together!

Author's Response: I\'ve heard about the ST fanfic, but I would\'ve been much too young for most of that decade to have read it, or read anything at all, then. I\'m glad you like the story ...
Date: Apr 19 2006
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: ...Into the Fire Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Very good! I am wondering if the sensors wouldn't be able to pick Frodo out, especially since they have Sam already to get sensor readings from. Hmmm! Reading on eagerly!
Date: Apr 20 2006
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Detained Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Blast, I have to go to work, but you write a compelling tale that I want to finish. I think I'll have to let Adora know that her site doesn't let you print pages very easily, nor copy text to paste it. Grrr... and just when I was getting into it!

Author's Response: Oh, I\'m so happy you\'re enjoying it. You do realize it\'s not completed yet? And really long.
Date: Apr 20 2006
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Council Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Frodo saw his cousin's blade burn to nothingness, even as his own must have done on Weathertop.

Actually, Frodo's blade did not burn up at Weathertop. Aragorn makes a point of saying that it is unharmed.

Yes, I am a pill. I must tell you, I have RARELY read a fanfic that I found easier to read and more enjoyable! Really! Your story logic is excellent and the characters are in character. I am just delighted to find you! A writer I can just read and enjoy! yeah!

Author's Response: Really? Oops. How embarassing. I\'ll check that out and make the necessary corrections. Thank you!
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Inside Information Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Oh, I love the dream(nightmare) that Frodo has! So telling. Such a well thought out story too - I do wonder if they could destroy the ring on the Enterprise. Possibly with a phaser? Hmmm.
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Unexpected Reviewer: Ariel Signed
I always get leery when I see someone trying to 'explain' the relationship Frodo and Sam have. I prefer the one that Tolkien described, but few others do, preferring to twist or change it to meet their particular bent or indiocyncracy. This one is close enough to book for me to be happy with it. Thank you for keeping the characters in character.

Author's Response: I\'m so glad that came off all right. I forget how many times I rewrote that conversation between Sam and Archer.
Date: Apr 21 2006
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Forge Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Oh, I like Trip-as-Boromir! That does so work. And thank you for NOT making Frodo into the wuss and whimp of many fanfics. Gads, that burns me! Haven't these people read the book? Or have they too bought into the 'you can only be macho if you fight in battles' trap that so many of the teen boys coming to this story only through the film have? Ack. You have given him the backbone he always had. Thank you!

Author's Response: Well, I figured Trip would be the one most likely to act like that, given how the Xindi attacks affected him. And I totally agree with you about Frodo. I don\'t know what they were thinking when they changed his character so much in the films. Anyway, thanks so much for the review!
Date: Apr 22 2006
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: A Short Rest Reviewer: Ariel Signed
I imagine we'll see a pair of 'coneys' on the fire soon, eh? Heheheh! Good chapter.
Date: Apr 22 2006
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9:Strange New World Reviewer: Ariel Signed
oo! What did they find?! I am really enjoying this, I have to tell you. I hope you are quick at posting updates. LOL!
Date: Apr 22 2006
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Communicator Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Ooo! T'Pol has been overcome as well! heheheh! You can never trust them Vulcans, can ya? Hehheeh! Only one chapter left! (sob!)
Date: Apr 22 2006
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: On the Doorstep Reviewer: Ariel Signed
OH! This is getting VERY exciting! Honestly, I have rarely found a fanfic that I read with such unrestrained delight! Most of them take such a strange tack, assuming things about the characters that I never did, describing the characters in ways that I can't even recognize them from the text, but this is great! You have Tolkien's Frodo and Sam in a world the author would never have envisaged, but they are spot on! And the story has the intrigue and complexity that always made Star Trek tales so interesting. Bravo! I will heartily recommend this - I only wish I had read it before the nominations closed for the Flame of Arda Awards - I'd have most definitely nominated this!

Author's Response: Well, I hope you\'ll enjoy the rest of the story as much! Thanks so very much for all of your reviews; I never expected so many all at once. I\'m hoping to have a lot more time to work on this during the summer, so look out for the updates.
Date: Apr 22 2006
Summary: During a lull in the action of a Middle-earth roleplay, Riot the ranger tells the timeless tale of the forbidden love between an elven maiden and a mortal man...
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Beren
Genres: Humor, Parody
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 885 Read Count: 1979
Published: Feb 21 2005 Updated: Feb 21 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Tale of Beren and Luthien Reviewer: Ariel Signed
*Snort* Yeah, that's about the gyst of it. Someone once wrote a synopsis of the Tolkien stories as 'A tale of jewery theft and the ensuing hand injuries' - I LMAO over that one...
Date: Feb 25 2005
Summary: The Ring wasn’t the only thing Sméagol and Déagol fought over.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Other
Genres: Action/Adventure, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5228 Read Count: 1499
Published: Feb 27 2005 Updated: Feb 27 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Minor Battles Reviewer: Ariel Signed
An utterly convincing and skillfully presented tale. This is what they were like, no question, and the hints of their future fate that you weave into the story are eerie. I've always been fascinated with these characters' early lives, and reading your well developed tales satisfies my curiosity fully. Very well done.
Date: Mar 03 2005
Summary: “It is not to be wondered at that he became very unpopular . . . they called him Gollum, and cursed him, and told him to go far away; and his grandmother, desiring peace, expelled him from the family and turned him out of her hole.” – Gandalf, FotR
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character, Other, Gollum
Genres: Horror, Tragedy
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1311 Read Count: 1452
Published: Mar 18 2005 Updated: Mar 18 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Banishing of Sméagol Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Ah... I do find your stories very compelling and masterfully written. Thank you for this!
Date: Mar 25 2005
Summary: Written for the HASA Challenge "Show Me Fear!" In the tradition of campfire dares and spooky stories, I give you a Harrowdale Halloween, in which Hama learns the meaning of some old tales.... Drama and fireside banter abound.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Original Character
Genres: Other
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8457 Read Count: 1532
Published: Mar 26 2005 Updated: Mar 26 2005 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Gastings Night Reviewer: Ariel Signed
I read this one ages ago and don't think I ever reviewed it - wonderfully atmospheric and detailed - an elegant read. Thank you.

Author's Response: Hi Ariel, I\'m glad you enjoyed the story. I had a lot of fun writing it, so it makes my day to hear how readers reacted to it. Dwim
Date: Mar 28 2006
Threshold by Mechtild Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary: As Frodo grows up, so does his childhood affection for a grown-up friend. Adolescent desire becomes passion, and passion deepens into love.

Note: Chapter ratings vary from mild Mature to Adult; somewhat explicit but not tasteless or extraneous.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Bilbo, Frodo
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 132986 Read Count: 13946
Published: Feb 13 2006 Updated: Jun 27 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12: In the Morning Light Reviewer: Ariel Signed
*Contented sigh* See? And I wasn't even the first to review. *Grin* As I have told you many times before, this is a lovely story with a hook for those of us with a few more years on us that most fanfiction stories can't achieve. It's a compelling and surprisingly real feeling story, brings me 'in' to their world by providing a heroine that sounds a lot like what looks back at me from the mirror each morning. *Grin* I like Rosamunda very much and I hope to see this story complete someday.
Date: Feb 15 2006
Courtly Love by gythia Rated: R [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Aragorn as an inexperienced youth, with vastly more experienced Arwen.
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Aragorn, Arwen
Genres: Romance, Erotica
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5608 Read Count: 10951
Published: Feb 22 2006 Updated: Feb 23 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Imladris Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Very compelling! I look forward to seeing what you do with it! (and good for you, Aragorn!) *snicker*
Date: Apr 10 2006
Nine For Mortal Men by gythia Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 35]
Summary: What happened to the Nine Rings?
Categories: Book-verse Characters: Merry, Original Character, Pippin, Sam, Aragorn, Frodo
Genres: Drama, Horror, Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36366 Read Count: 13961
Published: Feb 25 2006 Updated: Mar 19 2006 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: part one Reviewer: Ariel Signed
Finally get a chance to come back and review this! I really like it! You've got a Frodo with cojones! Yeah! I get so tired of fanfic's 'wimpy Frodo' - and while I wonder at him giving the rings to Pippin without worrying more about his cousin, you are absolutely right, there's no one else who could take them. Luckily they've got a retinue this time - with dancing girls! LOL! Pip would love that! I am going to enjoy this, I can tell. Angst and cojones and you write well. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this!

Author's Response: Thanks Ariel! (grins) hope you like the rest too.
Date: Apr 01 2006