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Bein, about forewarning me on that last review, there's no need! Have you looked in my story favorites? I've got several that contain much more . . . well, explicit stuff than this. I thought this was brilliantly written, especially considering the fact that it was written by someone who is thirteen or fourteen. I know how hard it is to write this stuff 'cause I've attempted it before. Anyways . . . love the story! Update soon!
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Bee
Author's Response: I am surprised, I must admit. I really should have checked your favourites. lol. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Awww! This was such a sweet chapter! Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much Bee! I\'m glad you liked it! :-) xxx
What a beautiful poem, SilverGrace! *applause*
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m so glad that you liked it! Be on the lookout for a new series that I\'ll be publishing this weekend.
Awww!!!! Thanks so much, Bein! Hugs and smiles to you, too! I hope you included yourself in that little tidbit about "the greatest people on the planet".
LYLAS!
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Bee (Brassen)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You truly did deserve it Bee! Truly xxx
I like this song a lot. Not many people concentrate on who they are and it's nice to see somebody knows. I certainly don't . . . anyways, it was wonderful, like all your writings.
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Bee
Author's Response: Thanks Brassen! I really glad you like my work!!! ~Mel
Author's Response: Correction: I\'m
Heh heh! This song made me grin and I definitely needed that! Today's been so . . .well, let's just say life has been complicated and crappy lately. Thanks for the smile.
Author's Response: You\'re welcome! We totally freaked out everyone with our costumes. Some people actually didn\'t recognize us!!!! I\'m sorry that your life has been crappy lately, but things\'ll pick up, I\'m sure! ~Mel
Okay, this story is definitely going in my favorites! Great job!
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Bee (Brassen)
Author's Response: We just had to write the diary of the One Ring, it\'s absolutely amazing how she managed to survive that long without a proper man.
Defiantly one of my favourites too.
Thank you.
Aw! That's sweet. I've never been in love before . . . except with Legolas ;). I love how you ended the poem happily because most people say how they've been abandoned or something. Very good!
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Bee
Author's Response: Thanks. I decided to move away from anger and loss and make it a happy ending. Thanks again for reviewing! xxx
Another spectacular poem! :)
Author's Response: Short and simple is enough to make my day! Thank you very much! xx
Wow! This is how I feel sometimes, too. Wanting more than I already have . . . yeah. Awesome, awesome poem, Bein! Keep it up!
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Bee
Author's Response: Thanks bee! I really apprecate the time and effot you put into reading and reviewing my stories! xxx
I'm at that stage in my teenage life where I just want to do what I want to do and I'm always trying to butt my parents out. Though I do realize that I'll thank them for it later! This poem is great for a lot of people our age to relate to. Loved it, Bein. And I know I've told you this before, but you are just an amazing writer!
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Bee
Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed! I understand completely what you mean! And as for being an amazing writer apparently...corh u made me blush. lol xx
I know how that feels! But I'm the sort who prefers invisibility to the horror of preps and other rep groups that I despise. I've recently moved and I hate being the new face in the school . . . luckily (this time) this song is how I feel. Great job!
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Bee
Author's Response: Thanks! I hate preps because they think that they are better than everyone and they are real mean. It doesn\'t help that I am a misfit. I have never moved, so I can\'t say I know how you feel about that one. Thanks for reviewing!!! ~Mel
Is this about . . . "you-know-who"?
Anyways, loved it!
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Bee
Author's Response: Lol! At first, I though you were talking about Voldemort!!! haha! Actually, it\'s not about the other \"you-know-who\" but about a girl in my class. You know, typical popular prep, thinks she\'s all that, has a boyfriend, also happens to tease me. Thanks for the review!!! ~Mel
That was very sweet! Loved it!
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Bee
P.S. Just so you know, the word "whim" isn't spelled "wim". Sorry to bring up spelling stuff and all that. LOL.
Author's Response: Thats fine! The criticizm from anyone really helps me! Thanks so much for reviewing! xxx
Wow! This story is great! I hope you update soon! This chapter was a tad odd without Gandalf but you made it work wonderfully all the same! *cheers*
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Bee
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks a lot Bee. It was strange for me too, cause I wanted to include Gandalf but I wanted this story to be based on just Pip and Katlyn and basically no one else. I\'m not sure if I was succesful though. Thanks again for reviewing! xxx
Wowie, Bein! Did you have to stop here? It's so awesome! Grrr! Me wanna to read more! Please excuse that brief moment of cave-woman talk . . . anyways, keep up the story! It rocks!
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Bee
Author's Response: Whoa! Whoa! The next chapter will be up soon! Hope you\'ve enjoyed it so far! Luv ya! xxx
I love how you make Peregrin so independent! He deserves it. I love hobbits! LOL. You already know how awesome I think this story is, so I won't annoy you with being repetitive! Just make sure to update!
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Bee
Author's Response: As you much so wish! Thank you so much for reviewing! Hey, I live with repeatetance. (That\'s not even a word is it? Ha! Well it is now!lol). The next chapters up. luv ya! xxx
Aw, sweet chapter! I really need to comment in more FULL sentences, don't I? LOL. Well, I must ask you, how do you manage to write all these chapters so quickly? It can take me weeks just to write a really short one!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! x
If I have to be honest, I\'m not sure. As you know probably, I\'m not the most dedicated person but when it comes to fan fiction and certain things I can keep going. I\'m not sure, to sum it all up. lol.
Thanks again! Love ya! xx
This soldier has some of Gandalf's wit! I doubt it's a coincidence, eh?
Author's Response: I knew I had to bring something Gandalf related in this story along the line, so I chose the soldier. Could be concidence. hmm... Thanks again for reviewing! xxx
I love how Denethor and his mind conflict with each other in this chapter. Genius, Bein!
Author's Response: Why, thank you! I had to say, this was my favourite chapter so far to write and it has so remained my favourite. I\'m really glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for reviewing Bee! :-) Love ya! xx