HA that was really funny! My side hurts. I wish this had more chapters, I'd love to read more.
HA I love the way you turned Arwen's personality right around!
I'm hoping for a sequel, I'd love to read that. =3
Oh gosh I was laughing and laughing and laughing. Really clever idea... I love it. =3
I can almost see the entire scene. Nice work!
Author's Response: thanks!
Nice! Sadly I haven't finished it yet, but I shall come back and review again... I wish it was longer, it's a funny story... =3
Author's Response: lol thanks!
Good poem! I like how you wrote about the sea and the visualisation you used, it's almost like being by the seaside!
Did you mean it to come out slightly melancholy but musical? I believe you did a good job whether or not that was what you aimed for!
Author's Response: yeah, that\'s what I was aiming for. Its how all of my poems sound... Its kind of my trade mark. Thank you.
Really good work! Your character is quite original. I like your ending... it's quite sad, but I tend to like sad stories better.
Glad it's completed and I like your style of writing in this story. =3
Author's Response: Thanks heaps! It\'s great to know you liked my story. =) I like sad stories as well.
Very nice style and ending! It's sweet, hope you write more!
Author's Response: Why, thank you very much! I usually have trouble writing endings so this is a first! Thanks for reviewing! xx
Very angsty; I like it. It's always best to get your feelings out in your art. Hope you write more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you like it.
Humorous! I like stories like this, they're really nice to read. Glad it's short and sweet! Just have to watch any mistakes in typing, as we all do =3
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I love to get reviews! ~God bless
Your writing style is very calming! I liked your story. Even if this is slash for some people, it's written well.
Keep on writing!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. Thank you very much. I\'ll try to keep on writing. :)
Poor Legolas! All of that is pure fact! Females just go for him.
Author's Response: Yep. Poor Legolas! Good thing he doesn\'t live in this world! Thanks for reviewing! ~Mel